| Reviews for Unveiling the Wallflower |
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Ninihil chapter 15 . 5/21 Pleaaaase keep up with thiiis! I REALLY need their first kiss! *0* |
Ninihil chapter 5 . 5/21 I LOVED this moment by the locker xD |
Unfilteredqueen chapter 15 . 4/15/2018 The character development was so good, this story deserves to be completed |
bincabincs chapter 15 . 9/17/2017 My gosh. You can't imagine the frustration I felt when his phone rang. I wanted to throw my phone out the window HAHAHA. Then again I did know it was kinda too good to be true. Nonetheless the frustration was real. Great story! The pace is just right, and there's just the right amount of fluff to go with it. Please do update soon, it would be great! 3 Loving it~ |
Koen D chapter 15 . 6/21/2017 Your story is so AMAZING. Seriously, how I haven't read your story until now, I should have read it years ago. I like the pace of your story. It's not too fast nor too slow, it's moderate for me to notice the changes in Sasuke and Hinata's relationship and how they fall in love. The characters aren't OOC at all and I can see the original Sasuke and Hinata in your story. But the best thing about your story is your writing-style. It's beautiful. Not many authors in this site can write like yours. Hope you'll update soon and thank you for your hard working. Your story is the best :D |
Nyanahf chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 yo those are like what she s actually known for |
Meep chapter 15 . 7/17/2016 Plz continue! |
silveraqueen chapter 1 . 3/26/2016 As I've grown up lots of things have changed. I've gone from trying to survive high school to dealing with work, spending time with my family and learning more about love with my boyfriend. But time and time again. When everything isn't going my way- or I feel like absolute shit. I turn to fan fiction. To the stories that kept me sane when I was a teenager being bullied or slacking behind. This story was one of them. When I felt like shit I would always look forward to an update. To me this story you wrote was one of the things that I looked forward to. Even now years later I just laugh at the paintball chapter or cheer on Hinata for opening up and taking chances. To fall in love with Sasuke. To try. Because I too am trying. We all make mistakes and to be honest I don't know what I'm trying to say here. Maybe I'm venting a bit but I don't think anyone minds. I think what I want to say is thank you for writing this and I hope you too are doing your best in whatever life throws your way! I'm trying too! Just like Hinata let's try our best Thanks! |
Sheepra chapter 14 . 2/15/2015 This seems very sad how sasuke didn't find her attractive but now that she had new clothes, hair style and makeup, she's now beautiful. Thats messed up. Im surprised she didn't even notice. and NarHana...that's just wrong. If the movie is like this then the morals must have been truly messed up. |
A Reader chapter 15 . 12/30/2014 Update Please! It's such a good fanfic and the last update was in 2011, I don't know, maybe you just quit writing it, but please don't I would like to read more. I don't even know if you'll see this considering the last update was 2011 and it's now 2015. Anyway, if you do see it, please finish it, thanks. Sincerely, A reader ;) |
cookies4lifetime chapter 15 . 12/7/2014 yesyesyes but where is the rest? hurry and update it pleaseeeeeee! |
oh god chapter 14 . 10/25/2014 This is so socially degrading— I mean, She's All That was a horrible plot, and sending the worst message. Change who you are and you'll be beautiful. I digress, Hinata can be beautiful in any way but what really irks m is how men always look to the body. Its nice but remember what happened when you're older, you turn into a sag bag. I don't neccesarily hate this story, rather to the main focus. Beauty isn't everything. I'd be more interested if Sasuke fell in lover with her personality... rather than saying, ...“Hey, she looks pretty I'll date her!" |
kandita chapter 12 . 2/25/2014 I find Naruto to be extremely annoying and over bearing in this story |
aurora0914 chapter 15 . 2/25/2014 Three years. *frowns at you*. Three years, and you still havent updated. No words, just no words. Some of the touches were nice, but sad that they havent kissed yet, also sad that Hinata holds back like that. I kind of wish she wen to prom in the black dress, just so we could have seen Sasuke's reaction. That would have been super uper cool. Update soon, and dont just leave this story! Also! It would be nice to delete the author's note chapter. |
MLeggyLeaf chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 Poor Kibaaaa. He's meanie here... Hahahha |