aww

Interesting. I was a bit worried, because I thought you might try and make Yuki rape Kyo, lol. I hate stories that glorify rape, or just make it seem like it's not a big deal (or worse, 'hot').

Anyway, this is an interesting way of looking at Yuki and you've portrayed this side of him surprisingly believably.

I like this. ever think of making it into a longer story? :D

aw poor yuki i feel bad for him you should write another one with them getting togather

Lol i like this chapter nice work~ Can you please make another chapter or sequel? Keep up the good work~! /

I have been waiting for something like this . The plot flows so smoothly! Keep up the good work. Also will you be writing a sequel? Cause I hope so!

Hi there Just a quick note to let you know...i loved it

im gonna go check out your other stories!

hmm... Maybe he's just taking things too fast and different for Kyo. u know most people woo a lover before bedding with them. Also more communication. U can't have a relationship without words after all. So maybe he should stop shutting up, and talk to him...also woo him with dates and go slow. Thats the more usual way how to do it and get laid...or gain a heart which ever he's after. Well nice job, its on the edge, but I don't think its quite an M yet. So ya, good work, c u later.

Aw... that was sad, but good. I really like the way you portrayed them in this, it'd be nice to see a continuation of this where at some point Kyo does say "yes". I like how it was sweet, even though it was more melancholy, and I like how gentle Yuki is with Kyo, at least in moonlight.