The ending was surprising in a good way :) at first I thought ron was going to ruin the whole thing, but u turne it around magnificiently

cute story, but drugging people to have sex with them? Reminds me a bit of ruffies. I was hoping Hermione would decide to not use the potion and just ask Luna about her preferences.

That was a really cute story and the ending was amazing, compared to the other fanfictions and books that I have read it is always hardest at the end but it was so passionette and beautiful 3

It's so Hermione to make such an advanced love potion. I really didn't expect Ron to join in since you didn't really go into Hermoine's attraction to Ron.

I thought the ending was funny. Luna seems like someone who isn't fazed by ANYTHING. I think that's why I love her. :D

im really open minded i mean human life is so short to close your mind! so i loved the idea of the threesome it seems fun and fresh ignore all those who are not open minded about what you like to write about

it's a good thing i checked out the ending first. i'm really no fan of threesome, and never will be. i was about to read your story, but i decided to scan the last chapter first, to know if this would be worth reading in my own definition. though your story may be a good one to read, but the ending totally blew my interest off. i was thinking on reading the whole thing, and then disregard the last paragraphs. anyway, thanks for the post.

Sorreh, I liked the story, but I honestly hate threesomes. *shudders* I don't want to imagine what happened in there. :' Sorry, just, not appealing.

i like the story but the end was just sick!

Not the ending I had in mind but not terrible by any means. A good story overall. Thanks for writing.

This ending sucked. Ron's a douche bag.

cute.

Great payoff very sexy! I really hope they stay together and not just from the potion.

ah nice cliffhanger right before the moment of truth!

this is great!

please continue!

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