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Aww i wanna read more...:/ please update soon:))

As you wrote this over a year ago (so you told me) it's obviously not going to be as good as anything you write now, however I do think this story has a lot of potential.

Like it!

What is Arica if her brother is a prince?

This is a fantastic story!

Well done!

Yay! You've updated! )

O... I can see a disaster on the horizon! XD

2 grandmothers? That is never good, BELIEVE ME! My grandmothers showed up to help me with a birthday party once... *shudder* ... None stop arguments, always saying to people that my sister is very pretty, and whenever those people say, "Both of your granddaughters are lovely" they BOTH reply that, Oh Yes, She has...erm... A lovely personality, doesn't she? ( which means, "shame about the looks...")

Thanks for updating , you should make her grandmothers really talented at makeup and dresses to make her entry in the ball possiblepossible and able to do a lot of favor to stepmother ,otherwise getting entry and talking to her is no smaall thing to do , or make them real fairies . Good luck A loving chapter . Hope you will finish it even with one or two writer's block

You are way too good at leaving cliff hangers for your own good! This was so amazing! Here I was thinking I was going to read another valient yet cleche attempt at recreating Cinderella, but this is so much better! I live Danie and Karter and everyone.

Please update soon?

-Mickeygee

This is a very good story, I can't wait to find out what happens next, although I did find quite a few gramatical errors. But it is very well written.

uh oh! :)

It was annoying that the woman kept calling her Kitten. It was okay to start off but it got over-used really fast.

What an awesome story! BUT OMG AT THE LAST SCENE! :O

O... scary! Please update! )

oh shit!