good story, very good indeed,this shoul have a continuation

I'm sorry to say, but you can do better than this. Bo is a guy, not a girl and I get a very feminine aura from him. Bo didn't strike me as the emo type to brood and cry. :-/

Also, there seem to be other character conflicts. Such as, when that wrestler felt Bo up, he wouldn't have reacted pleasurably, especially in front of another person! Would you if some guy/girl (dunno your preference) just started feeling you up?

His mother is another peeve. You made it seems as if she wanted Bo and Brooke to get married. If this was the case, she'd would've made a stink about Brooke 'suddenly' liking Bo's friend/would've wanted to know who 'this' friend was/and probably said something about Bo and Brooke getting back together. The way she's all blah about it doesn't make sense. :-/

Bo isn't some little girly man. He's a wrestler. He would and can defend himself, especially if he's the captain of the team. Plus, I doubt he'd let his so-called friends get away with their jeers. He'd be upset that they're tools, but be okay with himself.

Just my opinion on things. Don't take this as a flame because it isn't meant to be one. It's constructive crit and I like plot of the story and how you're still trying to stay true to the characters (OMG ZACHY Q! I WUV U! :*), but it can be improved. :)

~Runzu

So cute! I love it! Not to mention I love roleplaying as these boys. They're just so adorable! Please keep going! :D

I love this already! Cursed is one of my favorite werewolf movies, and I love Bo so much!

Can't wait for the next chapter!