I love it! Thanks for writing it, they are totally my OTP. Are you German by the way?

That was a wonderful story! I loved it! Especially the bit where Jack flung away all the labels and decided that he didn't care and that all that mattered was that he loved Karen. Thank you so much for the happy ending! Reading the summary, I thought that Jack or Karen was going to die and I was bracing myself for the sadness going into this story. After reading the first couple of chapters, I really began to wish that neither of them would die. It's great that the antagonist - the ever elusive Stanley Walker - dies. I hope you don't take my previous reviews to be insults. They were just meant to be helpful.

In response to your note at the end: it would be great to see a sequel. You've left a loose end: what happens now that Jack's a murderer? Did he cover up his crime?

PS: What does "Vilen Dank" mean?

Again, I will post my final review at the end of the last chapter.

Second paragraph, second line. "I thought you're plane..." It's "your", not "you're".

I'll post my final review on the last chapter.

This is just to let you know that in paragraph 15, last line, "He understood her so much better than anyone else, but still, she had a hard time letting her guard down and vocalizing her emotions", I think what the word you meant to use was "verbalising". Vocalising is a singing technique. Verbalising is saying thing out loud.

I love how the twists are in this story. I love the chemistry brewing between Karen and Jack. Nice Job!

oh my god. you should deffinately be a writer! this was INCREDIBLE i loved it so so much! please pleeaase write a sequel! please? lol u are amazing

3 Lydia

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Ek! Beautiful ending! I really hope there is a sequel! I'm so glad Karen came back all for Jack. You're an awesome writer!

AH!

I don't know why I just noticed that you updated but AH! Jack killed Stan! AH! Karen might be dead! (Is she dead? She's not dead. I'll hurt you if she dies.)

AH! UPDATE SOON!

OMG! You leaving us like this?

It's like a horror movie!

"Just before she hit the ground, he grabbed her by the hair and yanked her towards the stairs, his 300 pound body easily dragging her 125 pound one. Even with her kicking and screaming and her sharp nails clawing at his hands in her hair, he continued to drag her up every step to the second floor and down every hallway leading to their bedroom."

That part was just...wow.

Your imagery in this story is incredible! Holy crap.

Stan is such a JACK ASS! Oh my goshousness, please more soon! I can't stand the TBC's! lol

Wow, this was a great update...well what is happening to Karen is not great but the writing is fabulous! Yet again, what an aweful place to leave us hanging, lol. Update soon!

Wow, for as short as this chapter was there was a whole lot to take in. This is a very well written story. Please update soon!

I am completely in love with and addicted to this story, you have to write more. That last chapter was so good, I hope she tells Will and Grace about Stan and I had a feeling Stan would be there at the end but the way it was written was amazing.

Keep up the good work, you are a very talented writer, I love how you've written Karen, she seems so real.

Ho-ly Crap. That was amazing. Like, wow.

And OHZ NOZ. Freakin' Stan was there! I knew something bad was gonna happen! I just knew it!

PLEASE update soon! Don't take so long next time!

xoxoxoxo

I'm glad he knows. Now let's see where this knowledge will lead. Great update.