I dont know how often you get on here, but i hope you see this review. I read all of your stories year ago, and fell in love with them. I decided to revisit them and just finished reading this one. Im in love all over again! I hope one day you decide to add another amazing angel adventure to your works. I thoroughly enjoy them! Have a great 4th of july tomorrow!

Oh, poor little Kelly! Nothing seems to go right for her. This is so sad... I guess it made her stronger

Oh, no, she did NOT die! That's sad

Looks like little baby Kelly is gonna be born soon! I really like this story!

made my day. Thanks!

Hey KP! I just re-read Angels Beginnings for about the 4th time...sorry if i never reviewed b4! I totally am in awe of this story... so much in depth history - so much realism on each character - the way you built on every character...absolutely marvelous from start to finish...

not to mention your interrelational prose...

just for eg "Kelly racked her brain for any memory of proper squawk box etiquette, then decided it didn't exist."

You absolutely own all you write! I am constantly looking out for anything new from you! ;-)

At first I wasn't going to read this story because it has over 30 chapters, but I am so happy that I did. This is an amazing story and your a terrific writer, I felt like I was really there and this is kind of off topic, but Kelly's dad is such a jerk...anyway AEWSOME story :)

P.S. If you ever write a second one to this, I am totally going to read it and tell all friends to read it to!:):)

I really really loved this story. I was thinking that maybe for your next story you could bring back one of the characters from this story. I think it would be really entertaining to read if you brought someone back from Kellys past. :) Please? Thanks for this great story! :D

{"I'm from Texas. Not everyone has a last name. You only get one if you can fit it on a belt buckle."} That line is SO Kelly. Great job on this, I absolutely loved the backstory on Kelly. Maybe you could write a sequel where some people from her past come back to haunt her? Anyways, just a thought. If you do, though, be sure to tell me. :)

This chapter was so well written, I think later when Kelly grows up and is working for Charlie, Derek can cross her path again so she can kick the living shit out of him!

I am a complete addict of your stories. They are by far the VERY best ones on here. I need more, I need more! I read all 3 of your stories in a single day, (was up unitl 3am !) Amazing detail, well thought out story lines I am so envious of your talent! Can't wait to read what you have in store for us next.

Hello,

Just wanted to tell you that I just finished this story and, WOW. It was amazing. Again, your attentions to detail are so great that they make the story pop off the screen. You took the small details about Kelly's background and turned it into a fantastic story. Even Jill and Sabrina's backgrounds seem realistic. You have a knack for this I think.

Congratulations on a job well done!

P.S. I'm going to start reading your other fic now. It sounds like a page-turner...well, you know what I mean.

I stayed up until a little past 4 AM reading your entire story. Kelly was always my favorite. I liked how she was tough as nails and stuff. I really liked how you had her life before. I think the bad stuff was bad (of course) but it suited her to be the person she was. From the show she was the one a little reserved and shy. When the other two came into the picture I was laughing out loud, remembering the little I've seen of the television show. They seemed exactly how they were in the show. Anyway I just wanted to say thank you for the awesome read and I hope you keep writting! Thanks!

Beautifully written story. Great job and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

SD04

Well, thats it! Thank you everyone for sticking with me through this story. I hope you had at least half as much fun reading it as I did writing it. Additional thank yous for those of you who left me such nice reviews. They really brightened my day. Thanks so much!