| Reviews for A Real Good Man |
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alixandria chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 Hot Damn girl! |
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Really cute and fun and we can just picture hot Jake doing this with Bella getting turned on looking at him! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2013 Hotttt... |
Twilightlover1234567890 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012 mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... that was sexy. |
MaddieLovesDuke12 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 It was definately worth it! Love you and Love smmiskimen.(update please) Thanks MLD12 |
TamariChan chapter 1 . 6/27/2012 This contains both questionable content for the rating and song lyrics, neither of which follow the rules of . My suggestion for you would be to remove the song lyrics and the explicit content. If you just mentioned that sexual acts were performed instead of describing them, it would be more M than MA, which is what you want so that this isn't deleted. |
RunWithJacobBlack chapter 1 . 10/19/2011 That was good! |
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 11/24/2010 Yum. |
twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/10/2010 I won't be able to listen to that song now without thinking about your little story here. Great job. |
Louise M Frost chapter 1 . 8/4/2010 Bella is one lucky girl! |
sdeeeee chapter 1 . 6/6/2010 Damn! gah, i wish Jake really did that for me P *sigh* |
NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 6/3/2010 Go Jacob! I wondered how it went down when I read this scene in Dusk. This piece explained it perfectly. A bit on the short side but steamy! The song really goes with the whole sotry, and the Jacob striptease was just priceless! |
tried to delete chapter 1 . 6/1/2010 i love this story, especially after i read it the 2nd time while listening to the song! now if only i could get jacob to do that in my lounge! yum! |
fangxbanger chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 haha I think I came in my panties trying to visualize Jacob Black in the later scenes. You did a good job. |
penguins0013 chapter 1 . 3/29/2010 mhmm! worth it! if only he was mine...*whines* lol |