Poor Ed he was... raped!
Poor thing!
He was too young!

This was a great alternative story line but XD
I don't normally read fanfic's with rap etc. I skimmed past your bit... (Nothing against your writing!)
You're a great writer XD
Can't wait for more

I very much liked this fanfic.

I very much liked it

great story so far. so can't wait for the next chapter.

aw im glad soone put up some brotherhood based fanfics there all original it anouys me. Good story btw.. Lol, Envys idea would have been more fun. Oh well Lust had her turn.

This was really great...

Whoa...

Holy fudge this is gonna be fun...

Again, very interesting indeed.

This are starting to get interesting...

Ah! And here I was expecting Ed to get laid out flat by Lust! The opening said "Limey" so I was expecting lime. Then at the top that this was your first "Lemony," so I then expected a flat-out lime! You liar! You're evil, you know that! (T_T)

Nice! the manga version(lab5) was good but that was way better

Keep up the good work

Please update more stories like this one because this one was great. Good luck!

This is a great fic. Has alot of potential. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see the next chapter.

I think this will be a great story. I am a big fan of the pairing LustEdward for a long time so I hope this will be a pairing in this story. I hope you update soon and I wish you good luck!