| Reviews for Burn and Shine |
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   sosueme chapter 21 . 11/24/2019 Wow, knew this book was unfinished from the beginning, but it is GOOD. Love your descriptive writing style, your interesting characters, and the minute, slow boil. So good, thanks for sharing. So curious about how you envisioned it ending... |
| sosueme chapter 20 . 11/24/2019 It's almost painful, watching Edward - desperate to be 'normal'. You've got me rooting for him so hard, every tiny step is like throwing a bone my way. |
| sosueme chapter 16 . 11/24/2019 Loving the psych of the story so, so much. Carlisle, OMG, don't think I've seen this depiction of him! |
| sosueme chapter 13 . 11/23/2019 Wow. I don't know who will benefit &/or be affected more by that story, Edward or Bella. Talk about getting to know someone, some one volatile. So well written, and courageous as a writer to go there. |
| sosueme chapter 8 . 11/22/2019 So many sides to this Edward, he's pretty fascinating. Loving Jazz who seems more adjusted socially, but underlying he still likes to pick fights and live on the fringe. Your characters are very interesting and so slowly unpeeled. Love your writing. |
| sosueme chapter 6 . 11/22/2019 Poor Edward, it doesn't take much to see his PTSD. Loved the way you showed it rather than tell about it. Jazz is really a good friend. |
| sosueme chapter 4 . 11/22/2019 Loving this tale so far, gritty, balsy - just what I need right now. |
| Thea-sofie-95 chapter 21 . 8/31/2019 So good story! For some reason I thought it was complete... I know now it is 9 almost 10 years since updated it.. I kind of really hope you suddenly update it.. |
| Emx1490 chapter 21 . 7/28/2019 Great so fsrEdward needs help. Sorry but you can’t walk on eggshells around him all the time , Bella’s naive and she’s allowed to be when you’re young. I get he had a bad upbringing but when you constantly making it out to be her wrongly treating him and him being victimised and no one standing up for her. They go one about her judging them when they jump on her. I hope he gets help and she puts her foot down. And jas/Alice need to stop interfering |
| bethharriganation chapter 21 . 5/15/2019 Heya, will you ever finish this story? I could not put it down! |
| harkie5 chapter 21 . 4/15/2019 I really enjoyed this story! Thanks for sharing. |
| iloveyou1234 chapter 21 . 11/12/2018 Very nice story. Interesting interpretation of the characters. Can't wait for an update. |
| LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 13 . 11/9/2018 I'm sort, but it's not being a jackass to question somebody's upbringing when they're the biggest dick ever to you every time you try and talk to them. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 10/20/2018 Will you ever finish the story? It's really great! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/13/2018 He drink alot of alcohol...isnt that bad for his liver? |
