| Reviews for Inevitable |
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  guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2016 premise was fine, writing style and pacing good, no spelling/grammar errors. just one problem, but it's pretty huge: the 'voice' of the characters. the dialogue...it sounded nothing like them. |
 ritzkiaprilia chapter 1 . 12/21/2015 Wow, this is awesome XD loved it! |
| hogride chapter 1 . 3/19/2015 Sequel sequel sequel |
| Indomitos Instinctu chapter 1 . 1/9/2012 Fan-frigging-tastic. Gave me goosebumps :D |
| InfiniteMystery chapter 1 . 12/17/2010 hehe, nice story! love it! |
| Random Peep chapter 1 . 11/17/2010 Hee Hee loved it! Awesome job! P |
| Madhatterak chapter 1 . 4/22/2010 The dichotomy here is awesome. It's not till the very end that you can figure out who is who. I love it. |
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 4/1/2010 Unusually deep and well written story. A pleasure to read! Thanks! |
| Citrus Fever chapter 1 . 11/27/2009 Very nice! |
| Leandros87 chapter 1 . 11/4/2009 Aww, this is soo sweet. Will you make a sequel? please? _ |
| Sin Like U Mean It chapter 1 . 9/30/2009 OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT! lol you should so write more |
| eoraptor chapter 1 . 9/22/2009 It's a little bit heavy on the metaphor and seems a bit one sided right up until the last bit where she manages to turn it on the theif; but I think you managed to get the themes across well. |
| iceonthewing chapter 1 . 9/3/2009 wow you did a great job with the complex relationship of these two. i love 'em! |
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 9/2/2009 Well, well, soldier... (Whistles) Now, THIS was interesting! Pretty deep, I'd say. I couldn't for the life of me figure out who was who! LOL Every word was wisely chosen. And then, to seal it all, a li'l kiss. Nice, very nice work, marine. Semper-Fi! Carry on! |
| Daryl chapter 1 . 9/2/2009 this story is so sweet |
