Ok, it took me a little bit to figure out what was going on, but this was amazing! You're one of the few fanfiction writers who can write Naruto and Sasuke realistically. Thank you for being brilliant.

Thank you for this crazy beautiful ride with the happy ending. I was lying in dread that someone or both of them were going to die. The thing was, this read like a movie, the beginnings, the mystery, dynamics, suspense, murder, intense everything, a little bit of light, the hopelessness, something that seems inevitable, the dread, the standoff, the standstill, the reveal, the resolution, everything, if this became a movie... man, what a movie. Whatever did happen to Naruto's parents?

I'm alarmed and just need to know what happens next ;_;

The snark is alive and well here. Your Naruto and Sasuke are hilarious or just damn sexy. This story is engaging and easy to follow. The chapter had my breath catch from laughter and in suspense from the sexiness haha Thanks for writing!

love it that was great

That was great!

Love this. Will leave some huge ass review later when I have time. But holy crap, tears. I love your characterisation and I love this cute little plot, and oh, you melt my heart.

That was AMAZING!

You. Are. A. Legend. I hate you because I can't read ordinary fics anymore because yours are just so amazing all other stories pale and seem bland. Your characterization never ceases to amaze me. Its like you yourself are Naruto writing this. But Sasuke is
Dead on too

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute. The whole story I mean. And yeah, that's all I'm gonna say cause I'm afraid of what my mind can come up with when I'm half asleep.

I love your writing and I don't know why I've never read this before! It was amazing. Your characterization is flawless and the suspense had me on edge. Amazing )

So wonderful! Loved this story. Short and sweet and fun. Bravoooo

I think you are actually my favourite Naruto fanfic writer

I hope you write a sequel to it, like how their life is in the academy or after

anyway I liked it :D

good work

Really good story! I quite like cop/crime stories, not sure why. Keep up the great work!