It's proven in the anime his grandfather's last name is Muraki so is his father. ( I hope I'm not sounding rude or anything I'm just pointing this out.) :3

Um... This message is mainly to katmiko111 Kazutaka and Asato are their first. Names people don't refer to doctors as Dr.(enterfirstnamehere) they call them by their last name.

OH MAN! HAHAHAHA THIS IS SO COOL YOUVE REALLY GOT TO MAKE MORE OF FICS LIKE THIS HAHAHA SO KAWAI!

yet again another lovely story from you with amazing sex and who the hell do you kill around here for an epilogue ;)

ubber cute! i love it! so steamy~ and romantic! *squee*

Anyways there is something i saw that troubled me a bit~

Kazutaka and Asato are there LAST names...in this you make it seem like its there first names...

Was that intended? its traditional in Japanese that when writeing someones name there Lasts name come first then there firsts names after,when speaking of someone they say it the other way around...

You can speak someone in the term of [enterlastnamehere]-san but thats uselly with people you've just met.

I made the very same mistake you did in a fanfic i wrote awhile ago...it was devart and a finaly managed be some weird act of god got it posted only to put it down when i was told my mistake! its very common beileive me!

but if it was intended to use the last names i do apologize!

anyways~ keep on writeing more kay'!i absolutely love reading your storys! :3

~KatMiko11

I love youu...

I really love this couple even though more and more appear...

Tell u the truth, I kinda not so like gay before cause my oldest brother is one of them and one of my brother said its a bad thing...Then, I saw YnM anime...I really hooked. Now when i think about same sex relationship I think its very normal...all the same as normal couple, just that they accidently fal; in love with the same gender person...well...

I love this fics...and epilogue wil also nice...

Any new fics next? when will the wedding held for this couple? Though I rather Tsuzuki will become Muraki...He is the wife after all *dont let him hear what I said, I don't want Byakko chasing me* hahahaa...

Uhmm...the next world? does that mean when they die they get to reborn? Tsuzuki too?

Oh, by the way, ever though to make an AU fics with this couple? or make a fics about Tsuzuki's origin?

To:jollyolly,

I would like you to continue the story,

withsome enemies on it, it be trilling to find

each one of them trying to rescue the other. It

will be so romantic. I hope Muraki is the one to

be kidnap, its only a suggestion if you like.

Waiting for your continuation to the story.

From:Blue Hope

(Dashes into view and collapses panting) Holy hetero! All this review rushing is gonna wear me out! (Composes self) Oh my, what a lovely chapter! I'm glad they were able to sort things out. That's the sign of a good relationship; the ability to have a fight every now and again and move past it and get on with things! And BOY did they EVER get on with things! What a lemon scene! Written in your beautiful elegant prose as always. Both sexy and romantic. I for one vote that you add that next bonus chapter and again make me ever irksome request that you have Tsuzuki do a victory lap around thee big ol' tub!

This was as always an ever appreciated break from reality, my friend. Oh, and I thought it was cute how they called each other by their own family names at the end of the chapter. What a perfect way to wrap things up! It does seem like a nice ending there and maybe another chapter would just be too much... but coming from me, I can't say with certainty that that's especially good advice! ;

Well, must be getting back to work! Beautiful story hun, I encourage you to keep on writing because you're a natural and astonishing talent, with such passion for your work that it makes me envious! Keep it up! (And no Muraki, that's not the kind of advice you need to be taking either).

Love

~ Hickok ~

(Skids sideways into view) Here I am! (Pants and puffs) Whew, I need to work out more. Well, dear stubborn Tsuzuki got lost in the woods. I love that because it IS the kind of thing you can do when you've got a head up of steam and you don't really give a damn where you're going! I like that he called Watari to talk about it... even though I had to hear about THAT pairing. (Smacks head against desk) THAT pairing is contributing towards my brain damage! The snookums and sweet pea line did make me laugh though! I'm sure that's EXACTLY how Muraki and Tsuzuki refer to one another when no one else is around! XD I always thought 'Truffles' would be a good nickname for Tsuzuki. And maybe 'Pookie' or something equally as hideous for Muraki!

I particularly like how you wrote Muraki's internalizing in such depth. It perfectly demonstrates his classy use of expression, tendency to stipulate and still remain composed. You write a very believable Muraki my dear!

I love that inn that Tsuzuki came across! Of course, if I had my way it would have been haunted, abandoned for several years and been the site of several horrific murders! But that'd take some of the romance out of it, ne? XD Well, Muraki had better shift his handsome rear over there and make ammends! And I'd better shift my rear over to chapter three for one final review! Bon voyage, as they say! (Dashes sideways again)

Hey Olive-chan! Lookie! (Points) I'm reviewing! I'm usually so terrible at it but now I'm doing it because your email really helped me when I was feeling down and the least I can do is give this fine story of yours the praise it deserves!

I gotta admit, you know how sadistic I am and it's quite true but MAN I'm glad you've finally had Muraki and Tsuzuki get into a tiff! It breaks up the fluff for me and really accentuates their relationship! We can all totally get why Muraki would want to protect Tsuzuki and the like but Tsuzuki has a temper, which came out great as you wrote him. Tsuzuki is a very powerful Shinigami after all and he seems to think Muraki doubts his abilities. As they say however, love overrides common sense at the best of times. ... Well, actually I said that but I'm sticking with it!

Lovely chapter and lookie, whaddya know? You've broken the double digit mark! Now I'll review the next two chapters and you'll be even further along! I've already read them but I'll pretend to be hanging in suspense! Oh, what's gonna happen next? I hope Tsuzuki doesn't get lost in the woods or something, the silly sausage!

By the by, I LOVE how they're moving around all the time and living in different locations. The new house sounds lovely, I wanna live there!

Anyway, moving on to chapter two! (Dashes sideways)

Yes yes yes! Please do an epilogue! Oh, you are one of my favorite writers. You always do a wonderful job bringing Tsuzuki and Muraki across! I like that you had them fight, very beliveable. Relationships aren't always sunshine and roses, especially for those two. Thank-you!

aww the ending was cute, hahaha.

EPILOGUE! of course there should be an epilogue. all good stories should have one. and this is one of the good ones.

*squeals* I'm so happy that everything worked out so well. And PLEASE make an epilouge.*smiles*

yippee! they've made up and made up REAL good! XD