This needs more reviews

No talking

Perfect

right at the good part

Bravo, mon ami. J'adoré ton histoire. c'était génial. Vous êtes l'un des meilleurs écrivains que je n'ai jamais trouvé! French!

Alec glared, nails pricking as he opened his fists. His look was faintly mocking, as it to say 'then you shouldn't have been wearing it in the first place.' Who worked out it designer clothing?

'If' and 'in' have been rendered as 'it'.

That was a sweet oneshot.

~Mademise Morte

Again: chill worthy ending. _

I just love how you write these characters in the given setting; you make all the sense heightened, and bring attention to little things that might've been overpassed under normal circumstances. And it's almost sensual, your writing (in this case): it just calls to be continued and finished with a sizzle.

(woah - excuse my excessive fangirling, lol.)

To add onto my characterization praise, I love the exchanges between Magnus and Alec. It just speaks volumes. _

But I really, really enjoyed this. Great job!

Sid

Awww they'r soo cute nd Alec is so cutely nervous!

jus love 'em! xox

Why is it that my nose had already eru— whoa, deja vu. . .

(Norly, this fic is amazing/fantastic/hott)

LOL. Okay, so I think it's amusing that you rated this story M, and now you're writing a piece called Magic Moment where the stuff that happens in there is *really* M. 3

One of the things that I think initially drew me to your writing was your ability to make subtle gestures (or little things/touches) between Magnus and Alec seem so incredibly hot. Magnus stroking Alec's neck near the begin, the humming Magnus always does, etc. The way you phrase them and set them up makes the piece feel really sleek and sexy.

That's about all I have to say regarding this fic. _

YAY! Loved this too :D Magnus letting Alec have that little bit of control with the wall... *starts hyperventilating* if you ever felt the need to write smut, I would definitely read it :D Love this :D

Oh! That was dirty! I enjoyed very much. Having both of them being naughty is such a treat!

Brat~

Not THAT much more raunchy than the original... although I must admit that I loved the repeat on the light-bulb part.

You do NOT have enough reviews. This is absolutely fantastic. I'm too tired to write a long review but I love this and you for writing it.

Hm. So cheesy. Fits into the description of Alec and Magnus. Such a sweet pair