Please make it a two shot

this is the greatest thing I've ever read. I didn't see the ending coming. great job. it's so good... I literally can't take the shock. so good.

Awwwwww owo feels~!

OMG MY FEELS! I CRIED AT THE END! YOU TOO GOOD FOR THIS WORLD! T-T

I loved how you put this together, I mean it's awesome! But another thing is, I'm weak. I literally cried at the end, CRIED! Your story is that good! Keep it up and don't let any one make you want to stop! As a 12 year-old (guess ya didn't see that comin'!·) I think I am very soft but until I read something like this, I have an ultimate breakdown. Well! I got a little sidetracked. As I was originally saying, keep up the awesome work! (FYI: The lambo twins (Sunstreaker and Sideswipe) and the jet twins (Jetfire and Jetstorm) are few of my favorite 'bots.D)

w Yeeeees! So sweet, and characterized so well!

I think the jet twins are sides and sunny reborn.

But the feels[starts crying]
Why did they have to ddddiiiiiiieeeee?

Ya know, I can just see Sides and Sunny watching Ratch talk to the twins, still smiling.

Oh nice a Ratchet Jettwin fic...OH PRIMUS! THE lAMBOS! My favorite Helion-Twins!
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Wait...no...NO! NONONONONONONO! NO!
*Wailing, and rocking forth and back under my desk crying*
THIS IS TOO CRUEL! NO! HOW COULD YOU?! IT STARTED OUT AS A WONDERFUL FIC AND THEN- I CAN'T...I CAN'T HANDLE IT! VECTOR SIGMA WHYYY?!
WHY IS THIS FIC SO GOOD AND- SAD...AND...GOOD...AND...HFJASHFKHFLAFHAKLFHA

now excuse me while i cry myself to sleep...

why?! TTTT

If Sides and Sunny were alive, they would team up with the Jettwins and all hell will break loose in Ratchet's medbay. It will be epically hilarious! You have a great plot idea, and the twist at the end was very interestesting, sad but heartwarming

That was wonderful

Sooo cute at first i was all like 'waaaat' then i got it and i was all like 'ohhhhh' and this was the coolest story ive read all week. so congrats ;D loved the fluffy endin'

Wow. That was truly touching. Thank you for pulling off the emotions so well. :)

This...this and the tears and the sad...

This was AWESOME! It was like something out of a movie.

The ending made me do a fast double take, but this was AMAZING. And the end brought a tear to my eye. Fantastic work.

OH MO! they died? i so sad...*cries in corner*