Grrr! Why'd you have to end it like that!? The story was so good, haha, I want to read more!

I love this! Why indeed?

Really cute. Well written too. :) Really liked it.

Eh. My first complaint it that it was way too long. It just seemed to drag on and on and on, without really anything happening. I feel that you could cut a lot of this. Second, the writing doesn't seem to flow as smoothly as it could. Tonks and Remus both seem out of character as well. Other than that, it's pretty good. I'll give it 3/5 stars.

Adorable!

YAY!

REMUS AND TONKS 4EVER!

Thank you!

why was Tonks unconscious? Did I miss something?

ooh, wow. this is a great story and like someone said earlier, you've got a very nice writing style. i'll be looking forward to more!

Why oh why, indeed! You have an amazing writing style and I love how you're portraying Tonks and Remus. They're so in character and so well-written, and it just makes me happy! So thank you, and update soon!

I am filled to the brim with fluff! Now I feel happy and warm and fuzzy, and all the other girly stuff that you're not allowed to tell my friends that I like feeling like. I have a reputation to protect, ya know! Good job!

Great story. Really lovely. Characters developed well, seems very fitting with the real books. :)

That was the best version of the aftermath of Tonks and Remus' argument that I've ever read! It was so true to the characters, and just awesome! Great job!

Wow !I love it ! That's the story I was waiting for since I have read that chapter in the hospital wing ! Thanx so much ! It's really very well written, characters feels exactely (or so) like they're in the book. For me, the story you wrote fit exactly what should have happened ( that is, if Young children weren't reading Harry Potter, for it's rated T !) when Tonks and Lupin left the infirmary.

I'm sure Jo Rowlings would grant this fiction with an O for optimal. You're on top of my favorite !

A question though : I know I'm only french and I'm not a reference for english grammar, but I humbly think you inverted two words in this sentence : "covering her *hands* with her *face*". Shouldn't it be "covering her face with her hands" ?

But don't worry, it doesn't change what I think about your whole story. I officially discern you a special virtual award, cause THIS is the best story I've read this summer !

Read you soon I hope,

Codzwallop