I liked it! It was very moving and I could see it happening. You are a very good writer.

This was amazing! Amazing!

Wonderful tear jerker!

Stunning. This is THE BEST Harry Potter FanFic I've yet read. Just... so touching, yet sad. I could feel Aberforth's love for Ariana, just radiating throughout the peace. I could feel Albus's want to make the world a better place, go to all means necessary for the 'greater good', as he did. I could feel Gellert's anger reverberating throughout it. I felt Aberforth's angst and hurt at seeing her little twisted form lying on the ground. I could feel Ariana's want to help Aberforth, her confusion, her fear, her words echoing in her mind. I felt this piece perfectly. It was all amazing, all perfect, the best writing I've ever read. I'm trying to write a book, and succeeding, but it will take a while yet to make it sound and FEEL like you made this piece. I loved it, one hundred percent, absolutely, totally, completely, wholly, finished, done. And I loved every bit of it.

omg sad!

I just recieved a reply from an author of a story I reviewed. He/she mention reading a fic like this about The Dumbledores' situation I think this is it. I'm tearing up right now, this was so tragic and quick, you wrote it so that it is believable that Albus and Aberforth could never push this away. Well done.

I commend you.

That was so good! It made me cry!

That is a really good, well written story, but it's really, really sad!

OMG

Tear jerker much!

Awesome writing though!

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