You have to work on your spelling and grammar.

a very nervous gohan backing away up from his girlfriend while saying please put the branding iron and tattoo gun down you are never going to brand or tattoo a property of videl Satan on any of my body videl smirking at her boyfriend oh really erasa now gohan could be seen frozen in place by a naked erasa while his girlfriend brand and tattoo property of videl satan all over her boyfriend s body

Pretty sure this is my 3rd time reading this fanfic lmao

can you please update this story I would really love to know what happens next. I would choose the work of a travel agent or something similar. but that is just what sutes my personality. I believe everyone should do a job that they want to or to be more specific a job that fits perfectly with their personality. the best idea for the one that loses that bet is they should take the demon duo to a theam park, and there the two should get into a lot of truble. I would really love me it if you can insert a z warrior reunion in the field trip somewhere. and I would love to see how Hurcule is umiliated.

Lol videl saying to gohan wth is wrong with did you mom wanted y9u to interact with other peop!e your own ave by sending you to high school and what do you do run fly away and refuse to let me get to know you properly stop with outing walls inbetween us son gohan let me in let me be your gf

Awesome story I really hope you continue it one day.

Please continue this story it is amazing!

The scathing side of me wants to rip your writing a new one.
The other part of me is reading this as Canadian subtitles and is thoroughly enjoying this!

Point,ess review given how old this is... and how I’m rereading this because it’s so good, but the GR scene is a bit whack.

I mean this genuinely. As someone who played football throughout high school and still works out a couple of days out of the week I can confidently say that the jocks, as long as they’re stereotypical muscle heads, should have handled 2x gravity pretty well. Easily even for the stronger ones in the group specifically Sharpner and Videl.

3x gravity is where things should have gotten rough given how internal organs are affected and breathing would become very difficult (though it was still difficult in 2x). Even then Sharpner should have had Videl’s reaction to 2x and Videl (if she’s as strong as suggested by the anime) should have begun to really struggle. 4x should have been the knockout blow and I say this because at 250 lbs my personal best in squat and leg press was pushing 550.

I’m predisposed to being strong, good genes that make it so my muscles repair a bit quicker and more efficiently than what is normal. But I’m not a gym rat and really only workout casually (not enough to keep off the weight unfortunately). Even then two gravity would not have been a massive deal, especially given how I used to do army training drills in the summer with my uncle, who is a retired lieutenant, in which I would carry something equal to my weight and run laps. Not easy, but certainly not extremely difficult either.

All that to say... this chapter was whack. Love the story still.

dammnit, why do all the good stories die so soon

ahh well I can always hope this one's only dormant

Amazing I adore your story I hope you will update soon it’s been a couple years since you did but I’m willingl to wait

Great story update soon

Love your story it’s great please update soon I can’t wait to see what happens next

I know it's most likely not going to happen, but I would like to say I loved this and would love to see it be finished one day

I love this story