ugh hiro is soo stubborn...keep writing, this is great! :D

woah not good to get hiro mad...the story hiro was saying made me laugh a little at how he kept using the word stupid, but still pretty sad, loved this chapter alot, i was looking for a good story to read and i came across yours... this is great! love it alot! :D

Oooh. Please continue writing, I really want to know what happens next.

Gosh, nowaki is too damn perfect.

Yes, I was wondering where the hell the damn waiter was. Terrible service! Hahaha. I love this though, everything was written very nicely and in character. I'm happy Hiroki finally let all that out, now Akihiko knows the pain Hiroki went through. It really was terrible what he did to him, even though it was unintentionally and he was very much unaware all these years.

Another fantastic story! Like all of your previous Junjou works, this one is perfection.

I know you thought in earlier chapters that Hiroki seemed kind of OOC, but I loved it. I agree with the others that Hiroki can be kind of a complex character. I love how you portray Hiroki and Misaki in general, though. Daresay, I actually like them better the way you write them than in the actual manga/anime; they're not quite as...uke-ish. Haha. Not the stereotypical type anyway. I like it how you make them bolder, because their constant screaming of "NO!" (mostly on Misaki's part) tends to get annoying after a while. They're just more real your way.

I also love it how you made being "cold" Hiroki and Nowaki's euphemism for horny! Teehee. _

Anyway, I do sincerely hope to see an update of this sometime in the near future. It's obviously been on a bit of a hiatus, but I know you're still alive out there because you just posted a new fic this month! :D

Why cant you finish your stories!

This was really well-written with interesting vocabulary and a flowing, passionate rhythm. Your imagination is evident in the way they both seduced eachother.

This part made me laugh very much:

Nowaki felt brave, so he stared at his lover's adorable hole and whispered. "Then tell me what you want, directly."

"Bastard! You know what I want!"

"Say it." Nowaki whispered, licking the surface, again.

"Mmm… Put it in!"

"There are many things I could put in." Nowaki pointed out. "Hiro-san should be more specific…"

"Your dick! Put it in!"

"Put my dick in what, Hiro-san?"

"You fuck… asshole…" Hiroki groaned, squeezing his hand around his cock, tightly. "Put your cock in my ass and cum inside me!"

Nowaki smiled. "That was so arousing, Hiro-san…"

"Mmm… put it in… fill me up with your huge cock…" Hiroki snapped

Just too good- well done!

PLEASE CONTINUE! THE PLOT IS GREAT! :)

Hiii please update this story please you need to update I loved ot please!

Beautiful! _

Ahhhhhhhhh!

Nowaki Kusama!, you freaking hunk!

I love your stories. I love the fact that you know exactly how to portray the Junjou Romantica Hiroki, since we all know hes a little difficult. I wonder how Nowaki ever puts up with his stubborness, ahhh but I guess that makes me love Nowaki more! xDD

Good luck with this, and all of your excellent works. Keep up the great work!(:

... Did you die or something? If you never intend to finish your stories, then why post them? Ah but they are great. Anyway... U.P.D.A.T.E!

I really like this story, but I was wondering if you could write another chapter. I know its been a few years since you wrote this, but I would really like to find out the ending. Thank you.

Why did I decide to read this knowing it wasn't finished... I want it to be finished *sniffle* One thing I wanted to point out though, was that I feel that Sumi was a bit OOC, I love the rest of it though. You have such wonderful plot.

pleassssse ! the rest !