| Reviews for Move to the First Side |
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the17thmuse chapter 4 . 7/10/2016 This stabbed me in the heart, and it hurt so much. Damnit. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 Oh thank goodness for Kurenai |
mndstjohn chapter 4 . 5/14/2013 This is a good story. Keep up the hard work! |
Zanza Flux chapter 4 . 4/11/2013 This was a beautiful story. It was sad, but still had a glimmer of hope at the end. Poor Gaara. That little bit of kindness that Iruka showed him had an impact on his life. It wasnt apparent at the time, but I like to think that even tho Gaara's memory was rearranged, his heart never forgot. He may have decended into madness in his later years, but I like to think that the fight with Naruto sparked something in himself that was thought lost a long time ago. After all, Iruka was Naruto's teacher and the first person to show him love. Naruto always carried apart of Iruka with him and he was able to share that with Gaara. The mind might forget, but not the heart. Iruka should be proud. |
Anjiera-sama chapter 4 . 3/7/2013 Mooooore with Gaara remembering. |
Viviane Renard chapter 4 . 9/3/2012 Good story! I enjoyed reading it. |
wrencrank chapter 4 . 9/1/2011 That's so depressing. I'm glad Gaara got a tiny moment of happiness though, even if he doesn't remember it. I can understand Asuma's view though. |
ahbuggrit chapter 4 . 5/20/2010 Really adorable... It really would've been great if Iruka had rescued gaara and brought him to Leaf for Naruto :) still, i like how you finished it, though i would've preferred for it to be fleshed out - simply because i like your style :D An excellent job - i particularly appreciate the clear descriptions :) KAK |
LadyKhaiju chapter 4 . 2/2/2010 Oh snap!My eyes are tearing! Man, i was really hoping that Gaara, Iruka, and Naruto would stay in Kohonaha...you broke my heart! But never the less, this was awesome and tied together was definitely bittersweet but great. You also have a very good sense of characterization. It seems like something our favorite nins would it up! |
blerghy chapter 4 . 1/5/2010 That was sad, but beautiful. Loved it! :D |
jazzy2may chapter 4 . 11/28/2009 make me cry. so sad and sweet at same time. |
cowhand Steve chapter 4 . 11/2/2009 Wow! Wonderful fic! Your chibi!Gaara is so cute it’s almost painful. I think that the ending is particularly well done. It’s very touching without being melodramatic. |
ncfan chapter 4 . 10/12/2009 If you don't mind me asking, could you do a oneshot or a short story concerning Kurenai's reaction to Iruka's revelation in the last chapter(the owl, and Gaara remembering Iruka from somewhere), or maybe Iruka (and the other ones who were there) reacting to the news of Gaara's death and subsequent resurrection)? Please? |
Vegakitty chapter 4 . 10/6/2009 Aw, that was sweet. Just the right kind of story to send me to bed. Thanks for the good read. D |
HelloDuncan chapter 4 . 9/17/2009 Aww, so sad byt happy at the same time. well done, i couldn't stop reading. i felt so sorry for gaara...poor baby. wow, you have a gift or something cos it was great! anywho...i like was hoping gaara would remember or something but this endung gave in a beautiful effect. lol love it yay you! XD |