| Reviews for What Deidara Left Behind |
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   thentheclownlaughed chapter 3 . 9/14/2009 cool chapter:D update soon:] |
| thentheclownlaughed chapter 2 . 9/5/2009 awesome chapterxD update soon:] |
| katarauchiha653719 chapter 2 . 9/4/2009 aww...that was a very cute chapter! i enjoyed it very much and even though there were some grammar mistakes, you still got the main point of the chapter through. i feel that maybe next time you could add in more detail or i don't know more substance to the chapter...not that it's bad, but maybe you could make the next chapter a little longer. but other than that, i liked reading it very much! good job and keep it up! :D |
| thentheclownlaughed chapter 1 . 9/1/2009 awesome chapter:] update soon;D |
| katarauchiha653719 chapter 1 . 8/30/2009 aww...i thought that chapter was very cute. i haven't read that many stories that start out with deidara's childhood, so i definitely look forward to see what will happen next! :D as for now, your run on sentences aren't that bad, besides, i think you should focus on more of the content of a chapter than grammatical mistakes. but i thought this chapter was a nice way to introduce the characters. can't wait until another update! and if you wouldn't mind, maybe you could check out my stories? thanks so much! and hopefully you update soon! |
