Wow….just wow. This was so awesome and trippy. I had a lot of fun reading it. It's always interesting to examine the mind and inner workings of a character who is slowly loosing themselves, and to see the world from their slowly warping perspective. Thanks for the story!

Why does this not have more reviews? It needs more reviews, 'cos this is so darn awesome and I love it and GEEZ it just needs more love and attention from readers of the world so there.
So, yeah. This is AWESOME and you are an AWESOME writer and yep. Thats about it?
Oh, and you write AWESOME stories. :)

Im speechless, poor Allen :(
Brilliantly written

Amazing

Sad!

love dat twist there at the end. eternal loops. great one-shot. :)

Omg, Allen! That's really depressing when Allen's choking Lenalee there. There's also those sentences that just cut off and finish each other that's a really nice touch.

I love how you cut off the sentence and finish it in another place. It confused me for a second, but i caught on soon enough. i hope you make another allen and 14th story. I love 'em! Plus, I love how you added Mana. Touching, really. :)

I love this! upload soon!

Poor Allen. But a good story.

and it repeats omg i love this, was confused at times when the scene changed but i caught on, flamming fantatic, and reading it also reminded me of an idea for a one shot i had some time ago :D thank you v-muchso Gracias

Wow just wow O_o

I'm speechless with the twist and the never ending cycle. It was written great and I loved it XD

I laughed about the croissants! LOL ROFL I'm still laughin' about it! LOL First, my reaction was this: Wow, Mana must really be into croissants... . Neah just kinda looks at him like, "Dude, they're croissants. We can get more... Sheesh." Anyway, keep up the good work.

awesome fic *_* i wish there were more 14th stories out there Q_Q

I find this gem, and then, "WHAT? No love?"

Really loved the interspersing, and the run-on-break/lines that also helped to loop the beginning and end. Especially the last bit about the looping (makes for a cohesive, self-contained piece- Like when you look into a fragment of someone's life...? Or! Or! When you see photos being taken with lensbabies and people look so much a part of a tiny toy-town, but at the same time so isolated from their surroundings...)

And ah- it feels like being in Walker's mind while the breakdown happens.

I'm not too coherent- Apologies. But thank you for writing and sharing this! It's been loved by someone.