i read chapt 4 and 5 and they were good. they actually started making me tear-eyed. sad but good. keep writing.

Oh ~ I liked this! 3

Now to point out some small mistakes:

And he stands their.

The "their" is the wrong one. It's there.

...he looked apon the dying angel.

I think you meant upon instead of apon ~

Anyways, I really liked this story, /sniffsniff

It gives me a feel that they were meant for each other

XD

Pein this collection is cool. My favnrite...well i dont have one cuz i like all em so far. Very good. : D

aw i love it!

and its so sad!

but will they be reborn again or something?

i was kinda lost their sorry.

o.o again with the great story ... man whenever i read a new up date to your storys mine seem to suck more so i start over, gess i whant them to be as good as yours

lol!

I'm sorry the title just made me think of sasuke being 'short and sweet'

XD

man you kick ass at this stuf!

me likely :D

me likey xD