Ohhhhh, this made me cry. Beautifully done.

The show always walked a fine line with their treatment of the Wraith. Yes, they are life sucking space vampires, but the characters would, at times, make decisions about their wraith prisoners that (in my opinion) made them hardly better than the Wraith themselves. That old idea of fighting the monsters for so long that you become one yourself...

I did wonder though if there was something more going on than just maternal instinct kicking in. The protectiveness and possessiveness seemed very Wraith-like... Curious... :)

How very sad. Might have been a new start for human/Wraith relations :-) Great story, great imagination!

really loving it

I absolutely loved this story, I got kicked (literally) off the computer b4 i could finish. But this has got to b one of my top 5 SGA fics of all time. Could u do a follow up or something? (with Kit and Keller)

Sweet story! :)

This is a good story that portrays quite a different take on Keller. Shame she couldn't keep Kit! I like it ;-)

Your best story... :D

This was a great story but sad in the end, poor Jennifer, it must have been heart wrenching, and for Kit to be left hoping when all he wanted was Jennifer. A moving story.

really liked this. Kits so cute.

now to convince you to somehow continue with it.

Very cute, and intersting. Great job!

It was well worth the wait. This is truly beautiful and made me laugh and cry. You did a very good job on characterising Kit and the Lanteans. It's one of the best fanfics I've ever read.

btw I'd baby-sit Kit anytime. ;)

That was lovely. How Kit was found and named and what happened to him at least Jenny helped him. Lovely. I notice this is chapter 1, so more to come I hope.

That was awfully sweet and you actually made me like Keller. I liked Sheppard's reaction to Kit and then the way he warmed up and everyone stayed in character. Poor little guy.

I really liked the idea of this, very different to other things I've read! I loved how you just focused on Jennifer here, I really liked how you wrote her, and Kit was adorable! Great story! :)