I can't imagine a better nurse than Tami.

This really struck me, this line - "Tami looked up to the sky, sorry she wasn't stronger" because she's the strongest woman in that show, and yet, here, at this moment, it's not enough.

The way you kept up on the health details shows you definitely have some knowledge, which is much better than if someone tries to fake it. Also, you managed to keep everyone in character at the same time.

And all their fans said 'Hallelujah!'

Perfect, perfect job on keeping me on the edge of my seat until the final moment of happiness at the end. I was just as afraid as Tami up to about the middle, and there were tears in my eyes until that same time, too. How you know your suspense! 3

Keep up the great work,

-Weasley-

Ohhh man, this is just like what Steven King wrote about the superflu all those years ago...nice job on holding my attention and making me worry for all the characters involved. 3

*reads on*

Loved the story. Of course, I love anthing with Coach Taylor,and when a little angst is thrown in for good measure, it's icing on the cake. Thanks for a good story.

Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this, but it was well worth the wait :D You write Tami and Eric perfectly! And you do an awesome job of writing drama/angst - that's definitely not my forte, lol. Great job :D