i love this story but i wish you would stick with one point of view preferably raven's all these point's of view's are kinda confusing :( i still love the plot though just a little confusing that's all thought you should know.

This story was really, really good. I wish it had a ending.

Update soon please

you suck please finish combats hurt and i have them love you

Yet again flibertygibit

omyfucingod so romantic keep going

What the fucking hell its so not Alexander but I love it he is a compleat fliberty gibbit look it up it means femail fool

Say what? sanrg love it keep on writing.I ship Raven and Alexander but I am starting to like her and trevor aswel

is soin love I wish in the book we could see his sid eof the story also that would rock

O shiz

O shiz trevor was right

So romanitc add the combat boots hurt more than lofers i can do that now litarally

Omg! U r such a great writer! U have to write another chapter NOW! Please please please! Its the best story ever! Keep up the good work :) xoxo

Alexander no i know you deserved it but still and its an awesome story plz keep writing i luv it :o)

Nice chapter.A little action, but i would recommend that you use only one person's point of view of the scene because it gets a bit repetitive reading the same thing twice eventhough it's viewed from another person's it would have been better to use a third person and then describe everyone's thoughts and feelings. .