por favor escreva logo o proximo capitulo, eu não aguento mais esperar

tenho que adimitir que esse capitulo esta bastante engrasado, mal posso esperar para ver oque mido e saria vão fazer para salvar link

what a very funny ruto story

i love the story so far. please update soon.

I love this story! You got to continue!

Nice story so far I hope that you decide to update because I think the plot is very interesting.

Dark Link is a polygon, not your lover.

Not a bad story, though I wouldn't say it was great, either. I'm a bit biased because I actually think Link/Ruto is a cute pairing, my favorite in fact. I'd be very happy if you showed off mad plot twist skills and actually had Link end up falling for Ruto, but regardless, I suppose I'll still be reading.

Regards,

Futures

Um, no thank you walter. Maybe you should ask Scott...

RUTO IS A LOVELY BURRO! I BUY HER COFFEE SOMETIME AND WE EAT OMELETTS MADE FROM GOAT EGGS! YOU COME TOO AND HAVE GOAT EGG OMELETT! THEY VERY TASTY!

happy happy joy joy new chapters YAY!

yeaeah... I'm too lazy to log in, so... nice story. its really funny... lol, the yellow flowers. she should be allergic (sp?) to them... can't wait 4 chapter 2 million...

ps. YOU COME TO SPAIN SOMETIME AND WE FEED YANKEE CANDLES TO THE HUNGRY HOMELESS!

Wow. (Again.) The..duku..tree..spoke..funnies! D The yellow flowers was a wonderful idea. Your chapters are starting to be more fanficcy than pure comedy, which just means you are gaining skill as a writer and are channeling your creativity into a deeper depth of writing. Congrats.

I would like to point out one minor little thing that can easily be fixed though. )

This is the small paragraph I'm refering to:

Saria just rolled her eyes and started to speak, “Hello Great Deku Tree. I wanted to ask for some advice. You see, Ruto thinks that Link is in love with her and they insist to get married. Link is greatly distressed and we don’t want to happen. Right Mido?”

This is my personal opinion on what it might look better as revised, but it's up to you what to do, if anything:

Saria just rolled her eyes and started to speak, “Hello Great Deku Tree. I wanted to ask for some advice. You see, Ruto thinks that Link is in love with her and she insists to get married to him.(or "she insists they marry", but that kinda falls out of the writing style you established.) Link is greatly distressed and we don’t want that(the word "that" was simply accidently left out of the original paragraph) to happen. Right Mido?”

Hope that helps. As far as Shadow Heart goes, I really do try to keep at it. I discuss it with my friends a lot. It's just difficult finding the time to work on it, but I really wanted to tonight. You can expect another chapter tomorrow. Get ready for a major original plot event that's never been seen before in Zelda fanfiction!

P.S. : I was reading chapter three on the phone. I was so involved in the reading that I was like "Uh huh... Uh huh..." And had no idea they were asking me what I was doing. XD I might have someone else read the story too!

Yay the chapters got longer! YAY A REFERENCE TO MY STORY! D I was like.. "What's in the barn, What's in the barn, WHAT'S IN THE BARN? Shadowshadowshadow YES ! YES YES YES!"

And I'm going to steal your idea about the shadow being on the ground while Malon is talking. Ok? _

... XD You're writing improved on chapter two. Not that chapter one was poorly written, just that your new ways of expressing elements of your story seemed to be richer. It kind of reminds me of my own writing when you italisized (sp?) Some thoughts. It was very comical. Normally, I dont read OOC stories, but Ruto is RIGHT ON THE MARK. This is very comical.