"Don't jump him, don't jump him, don't jump him"
Hahaha! This was hilarious! :D

I can't even begin to describe how amazing this is. But really who could ever resist jumping Hayato, especially under those conditions. Very very hot, and the end made me lmao XD

I think I could die happy now. XD That was so sexy and great. Of course I love seeing Yamamato ogling Gokuera. It's just a given that it's going to happen.

Oh god, this made me laugh my ass off XD Nice story :D

omg!

awesome!

great job!

write more XDD

Love the idea.

Love the story.

Love all of those graphic words of yours.

Love Yama/Goku.

I'd love more of these! I'll be looking forward for another.

If I'm a teacher, this would be an A plus. Great story. :)

so amazing really! i want you to make a 275980 fic! i want to know your take on that! :)) ONCE AGAIN, THIS IS AN AMAZING FIC. thanks for making this! X)) lol

I liked that!

Er...though perhaps you should call it a floatie and not a floater?

Because, um...a floater is slang for a poo floating in the toilet or something like that.

ahahaha, that was something nice and light for me to read i really enjoyed it :) thanks

LOL! The ending!

The ending made me laugh XD

And this is great for a first timer. I couldn't really tell tht this was ur first time writing yaoi. It's awesome. keep up the good work

LOL Gukudera, what a cutie. The two are just so cute.

Wow. That was so awesome. It was, hmm, how do I call it? Delicious. A very delicious and in-character 8054 that was. I loved the last part, how Yamamoto kept altering whatever Gokudera said. This was an extremely good oneshot. :)

~xxtwentysix

Love it :) Early bird gets Goku and Yama smex! *drools*

omg sexy!

XD i knew Hayate liked it rough!

i just made myself blush

LMFAO. honestly, when i read floater i thought you meant some stray semen floating.

or a piece of crap...

i'm sorry. ;-;