Reviews for Dying Inside
CrimsonWildcat75 chapter 11 . 1/23/2017
ok just found this story. and seriously you need to finish this. please finish this it's so heartwarming and you want to cry right along with Mark.
ANDY REGINS chapter 11 . 6/3/2015
i need this story to continue please
renab06-13-98 chapter 11 . 3/4/2015
Ohhh my im happy for marky and shawny. _ .
please continue the story. I've been itching to know what will happen nxt. And I've read it like ten times already but u still leave it hangin. :(
Pretty please. U did write good at it and I enjoy it. Please continue it..
Guest chapter 11 . 7/22/2014
Dude y would u stop it there!? That's so unfair plz can u give us more plz
Dragoguage chapter 11 . 2/13/2013
as if the musi are gonna do it with a camera watching! HA! HA!
Haylie chapter 11 . 1/18/2013
Can you make the story longer plz? I mean,what happened next, what happened to Shawn?
Guest chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
YOU EVIL LITTLE . DONT YOU FCKING STOP THERE!
NightElfQueen330 chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I will wait till u post more so far this is good I teared up reading this its almost as bad as when I saw Shawn's attack in Chicago.
smiley1014 chapter 11 . 5/29/2012
Is there ever going to be any more of this story? I just found and I really like it! I need to know what happens next, but if it is discontinued, I understand. I usually do not read stories with the older guys in them, but this one caught my interest.

I figured, If you still have some ideas kicking around in there but are reluctant to post because you don't know if anyone is still reading, I figured I would let you know I am.

Reply if you have the time!

Larz
PunktasticJerichoholic chapter 11 . 1/26/2012
OMG I Love this story! Please, please finish it! I want the whole posse of Shawn's friends and him takeing out the guys who did this to Shawn! LOL. Please update it!

-Kt :)
Bucky's Girl 9 chapter 11 . 1/23/2012
please finish this
dawnieangel76 chapter 11 . 1/19/2012
Is there ANY chance you'll be continuing? Id love to know what happens!
nero hardy chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
*eyes glow red,fangs extend*SHAWN!HOW DARE YOU FUCKERS HURT MY PRECIOUS HBK!I'LL KILL YOU ALL
neverqueen chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
OH. HEEEELLL NO.

YOU ARE NOT GONNA LEAVE THIS STORY ABANDONED.

I WANT CHAPTER TWELVE. AND I WANT IT NOW.

*Brandishes weapons*
Icon HBK chapter 11 . 6/6/2011
Okay. I demand the end of this! After 11 chapters of crying, gasping and feeling injuries crawl up to my skin I also have to endure it being incomplete? No way! When it was all going so well! I'm the damn showstopper, I want it complete! (Please?)
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