Awww! :,)

Awe!.. ;-):D:D:-)
Sweet story!... :-)

That's really sweet and so Inuyasha...but seriously Hiten? Ick

okay so i've never even liked songfics, because i always thought that the lyrics messed up the flow of the story, and anyways, it just looked bad. you pulled it off really well, though.

theres kind of this one thing that ruins it for me, though. i think its a formatting error, but the entire second half of the story is in bold.

aw...

Aw that was so beautiful.

*cries* That was bayond cute, it was absolutely sweet, bravo, bravo!

Ja ne!

Jazzy xoxo /'.'\

Very sweet!