Uh, okay. Wow. I'm sure you're tired of getting reviews for a fic you finished so long ago, but holy shit. Wow. Okay. Alright. That hurt me emotionally on so many levels. From beginning to end, I have been emotionally murdered more times than I have been revived. Wow.

((Also, the ending? Fucking brutalized me. I'm both so happy he got to be knighted and so sad he got to die. Both endings are killing me in equal measure.))

Thank you for your story, which took a potato-peeler to my heart.

Just so you know, I LOVE THIS STORY! it’s 11 pm and I’ve already read this like 3 times over the years... I wanted to check out this story because I thought I remembered Obi-Wan drinking something other than tea in this fic (and I’m currently writing a fic and I wanted to use that term for what they are drinking) and I’m HOOKED AGAIN! It’s so well written and simply great! It’s these stories that make me wanna give up on writing because I could never be as good a writer as you are! Thanks so much for sharing and would love for you to return to writing! This site needs more of your work!

I enjoyed reading this, thank you for the ride! I personally didnt find the ending super ambiguous. it sounded like kenobi died to me.

I must admit Yoda was such an ass in this!) If only he didn't withhold the truth a lot of bad stuff could have been avoided.
All in all I like this piece a lot, thank you!

I really wished you gave a warning at the start of the story that there was an ambiguous ending because I really dislike them because they make me frustrated. Despite being an ambiguous ending story it was a good read I guess.

I love this story so so much! I couldn't stop reading (and... crying during the last chapter ahah).
I thought I would have to kill you for breaking my heart but thankfully Obi Wan didn't die so it's all good :) (WELL I was sure he was dead but then I read your comment at the end!)
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful fic!

Wow... I'm impressed with myself thus far! Or maybe I'm impressed with you? Any way, it's cool picking up clues and then seeing them become more clear as the story progresses... but i still remain in many ways as confused as Qui-Gon XD

Hrmmm... cmon qui-gon moveeee

The headaches... hrmmm were they dookus doing? I can't help but feel that they are due to someone manipulating Qui-Gon, and that the potential for that manipulation is the reason that he was not given more information.

Hrmmm.
Doing what he's told doesn't seem good for Qui-Gon. I'm puzzled by Dooku's role... it seems he might have more to do worth Obi-Wan than I thought.

Yoda, why are you even trying? :/

Aw yessss

I'm working on the assumption that Obi-Wan s former master went dark, and dooku is not. But we shall see.

Rude, Qui-Gon. Ruuuuude.

Im glad that Qui-Gon has begun to get over himself a little... but things are getting more and more perculiar. Could Qui-Gon be right about Obi-Wan brushing with the dark side? It might support his hesitance with a lightsaber. I find myself doubting it though. And daily training with the council? That is.. a lot. I am mildly disturbed and very intruiged.