Omg. This has to have a happy ending too! Puhleaseeee! Hope you can find your inspiration to finish yhis piece :)

This is very interesting, where did u go? T_T

HI HI So you think you're going to keep working on this? I really like it so far! Umm... Yeah. UPDATE SOOOON (:

*Spoilers

It's amazing! I just CANNOT wait to see what will happen next. I'm a huge CloTi fan and... gosh, I don't know how to say it! You put so much emotions in the characters' minds. I can feel Tifa's deep love for Cloud! Oh, and Cloud himself... OMG. He's so confused. I like it.

Keep it up! Don't stop until the story is complete... PLEASE! Don't give up.

I can't find anything wrong in your story, except like 1 word that you mispelled (but it happens all the time!)

I can't stop fangirling :)))

Has this story been discontinued? I hope not, because it had a lot of potential... So if you still have ideas, please, go on!

I really love this story so far! I hope you didnt give up on this story because I believe it has so mug potential and because I'm so curious as to when everyhing clears up. I sure hope you update and get this story up and going!

wow. cloud is fictional and thinks about sex more then me. i hardly ever think about it. good story though.

I CAN'T wait for the next chapter to come out! I am Really enjoying this :D Great job, you have talent 3 3 :) x

Ahhh that kiss was just wonderul between Cloud and Tifa . . .even though Tifa just kissed him on the neck but oh well! This story has a bunch of angsts and I cant wait to see what the next chapter is about!

Please update!

This chapter is just so cute!

can't Wait

Ahhh! *Squees in delight* Yay! An update! Sorry it took me so long to review.

All the Cloti-love had me fangirling all over. I can't wait until the next chapter! And 'the talk' between them about that moment. That kiss. Ah... I'm just gonna go continue fangirling in that corner, m'kay? *Thrust thumb towards said corner*

'Til next time!

-Valk

This is an absolutely wonderful story. If you hadn't mentioned in an author's note that english was not your first language then I wouldn't have guessed (there are a few places I found AFTER you mentioned that detail that point to it). It is amazing how simple the solution is that would allow Tifa and Cloud to be together but, at that age, it is a very difficult thing to actually act upon.

Even if English was your first language I would say you have a wonderful talent with words and plot. Please continue to work on this story and I will be counting the days until you update it. It is rare to find such a well written piece that focuses on people not events like yours does.

you need to update right now!

Hey, Fezzy. It's been awhile, no? Too long, perhaps. I've lost the edge of this story...that's the trouble with long-running stories. Hard to remember stuff-for me, anyway. Not to say that it can't work, just that the cup of coffee I set down somewhere awhile back is gonna get cold. I'll still drink it when I find it again, but it won't be that "ahhh, yes" experience that it was when first poured. But enough with the grumbling. The angst thing sends dread up me spine. And with 20-ish chapters to go, you have dark designs for these characters, methinks... sigh! I'll leave you to it now...where the heck is that coffee? I though I had it right here... thx mc

I am glad you are back. I was just thinking back to this story when you updated. Perfect timing. (:

Angsty, this is very angsty. It makes me sad that they are sad and that everything is so messed up. But that's life, especially at a "breaking point." Sorry, I had to put that in. It's past one in the morning.

Anyway, I can't wait to read more. Especially if we get to actually meet Aerith soon (will we?). I want to see how that turns out.