| Reviews for Consequences of an Honest Enemy |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/16 Anyone else listen to the song "master of puppets" while reading this? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/6/2019 WE WANT MORE RIGHT NOW PLZ |
 satoukazumasama chapter 6 . 10/26/2019 1. Yeah, the whole thing about Ayame was believable. 2. This Chapter is good |
| TheReaper999 chapter 6 . 3/6/2019 "Could of" is not grammatically correct. "Could've", or "could have" is. |
| Newotouto chapter 4 . 1/16/2019 That it just to easy.. I little hard to take. |
| R chapter 2 . 7/8/2018 Really? You gonna make a biju container with absolutely MASSIVE reserves of chakra into a Sasori clone? Thats SO lame. |
| Indra Sparrow chapter 7 . 2/27/2018 If you ever decide to continue this story, I would love it, but I understand why you have stopped this story. Sincerely, Indra Sparrow |
| TwoHands-Red chapter 7 . 2/23/2018 I'm screaming inside right now. It's like you broke my fragile heart and picked up the jagged pieces just to stab it, and then set it on fire. WWHHHYYYYYYYYY?! |
| 1529 chapter 1 . 11/12/2017 A very good premise and well written, but Naruto is massively OOC and there is no reason for it... realizing that two people didn't train him well is enough to change his entire philosophy of life? This could have been great, but someone whose convictions are as strong as Naruto's would not change that much for to Sasori's few words. Where did the 'will of fire' go and his looking up to the Hokages? In the end, there is just too little Naruto here, the main character might as well be an OC. |
| Locothehood chapter 7 . 10/28/2017 God dammit man Another fake chapter Same as the last two for freedom has a price. Sigh Well good luck with your endeavors it would be nice to be able to read at least one story you finished so if you could leave a link on here someplace that would be lovely |
| Blood Wine and Song chapter 6 . 8/29/2016 The ending of this chapter was incredibly rushed and lazy. No reaction from Tsunade about Naruto going rogue other then sending people after him ? No reaction from Sasuke and Sakura ? I dont believe Sasuke said a word since his introduction in this story. Sakura havent said a thing about leaving the village? |
| Blood Wine and Song chapter 2 . 8/29/2016 Ayame. Really ? What a disappointment. She is not a ninja, she wont bring anything to the story. No wonder the story is abondoned. I'll keep reading but it will just prove my point. |
| TheMasterfulRunningProgrammer chapter 7 . 8/20/2016 I am truly sorry that you have lost the will to continue these stories. They were excellent while the lasted. Thank you, and best of luck to you in the future. -The Running Programmer |
| the epicslime chapter 7 . 8/11/2016 I vote a and hope you do manage to write some more for it ... Or a rewrite ... Anyways its on the favorite list no matter watt |
| Seven Purple Chickens chapter 3 . 6/6/2016 And there is no council to tell her what she can and can't do. They were advisers, two of them, to the third. Ninja villages are dictatorships. |
