What...What the actual hell did I just realised.
IT WAS SO CREEPY. But awesome at the same time and I would totally read an entire fic about this because... just..WHAT HAPPENS WHAT IS GOING ON I'M SO CONFUSED YET IN AWE AT THE SAME TIME. So yeah please keep on being and writing amazing things like this

holy shit
i dont even know what to say
creepy, brillant and somewhat confusing

Weeeeeeell... That was only KIND OF FLIPPING CREEPY. :D Your writing style is great! Thanks for posting!

...what the hell did I just read? The creepiest short story in my life

I've read this so many times and I always love it!

This is horrifyingly awesome.

Twisted but a very enjoyable read~. Great job~!

Wow, slightly morbid, but I really like the way you went about writing the story.

Thanks for writing and posting this up~

That was so creepy and awesome at the same time :3 I'm going to have trouble sleeping tonight 0_o...

Woah. So... creepy. Really, it was really horror, old school. So awesome. Thanks a lot!

Mmmm...

It's good!

so very creepy...

so grotesquely creepy..

so morbidly creepy.

o_o

i especially like the byakuran twistedly (is there such a word-twistedly?) warping nursery rhymes.

i'm a bit confused though with mukuro's role... i didn't get his part..

So eerie and a tad bit confusing, but I love it! I'll just have to re-read it in order to understand better.

pervert.

what i meant to say was, :D great job! XD

XD Aw~~~ *finds this completely cute even though a certain someone keeps railing that it is CREEPY -glares at said person-*

I love it! D Lol! It's so cuute~~~ X3