Ooh I'm gonna enjoy this
Im alreayldy really intruiged by the differences between this set up and the Canon conclusion to events and how that's had all these knock on effects for 3 years later. Though it doesn't quite feel like 3 years, more like 1 and a half or something since it comes across, in this chapter at least, like a lot is still pretty raw. Like, the situation with Agraia has been affected by the revelations about Bradley in a way that's impacted their current mission, right? It doesn't quite seem real that Olivia has been Furher for so long already.
Then again I can also imagine it taking some significant time for Ed to feel comfortable leaving his still recovering brothers side to return to active duty, no matter how stir crazy with cabin fever I can imagine him becoming being stuck in Resembool for too long...
Either way I'm enjoying your interpretation of how the characters progressed after the shows finale and I'm looking forward to learning more since there definitely seems to be stuff for them to develop and bring to light and all that that's been forming under the surface all this time
And it's gonna be happening amidst an apparently dangerous undercover mission that they don't have all the info about, so drama is incoming!

Hey ! I like this story so far but I pinpointed two problems : 'Amestris', the country's name and 'Führer', which is the german word for 'leader'. I just can't read either without wanting to correct it XD so I wrote this review. Thanks anyway !

AHHGGHHHWIDLDKEKEHDHD I LOVE THIS SO MUCH THIS STORT IS SO GOOD AND I LOVE THE CHARACTERISATIONS AND ED AND JUST EVERYTHING! The plot is amazing, im so hyped to find out whats gonna happen and the OC's are great!
(also same hat, I'm also an equestrian! only 15 here tho, but i got my own pony who's the very best horse ever ~no im not biased whatever do you mean~)

I know you said that you would continue it but I'm inpatient will you please up date now! Do it for the love of fullmetel alchamist

I know it’s been a few years, but I just wanted to let you know that this is definitely one of the best fma fanfics I’ve ever read, so thank you for contributing this, even if you never choose to continue it :)

aw geez, I know it's really rare to read stories that updated 6 years ago but? I really really really loved this story and I enjoyed it a lot! I actually might've even reviewed as a guest all these years ago! I got into fullmetal alchemist when I was 10 and I vaguely remember reading this! I'm 15 now and it's good memories, making me kind of nostalgic? anyways, I'm not asking you to update or anything, but I really enjoyed this story and reading it again. I'm glad I could still read it, all these years in the future. I hope you've been living life and enjoying yourself! If you still write now, I bet you're even better now, haha. I wish you only the best! 3

God this is absolutely fantastic! I love that story and the family dynamic and how ed has almost no idea how a normal teenager behaves! I just love it and really hope you update soon!

Well, the story was good while it lasted. I'm guessing it's gonna remain a forever unfinished work of art since you've obviously had time to update it (other fanfics), but haven't done so in three years. Welp stuff happens, but still.. not even a note? Harsh

I don't think it was really all that rushed. That's how life goes - somewhat slow into routine, and then suddenly everything happens at nce and you're scrambling to catch up

Awesome! I really like that mix

Continue plz it's been over 3 years

Um. I know it's been years, but are you going to continue this? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DO!

It's just really... not quite annoying, but maybe irking? Yeah, let's go with that. Irking, that you've placed Ed in a modern high school when this is supposed to play out in the early 20th century. So, yeah...

Your last update was two years ago. I wish you'd finish this! It's just the story I've been looking for to read!

My guess is that Havoc's back hurts because he's old as well as a war veteran.