Just suck a dick already

Should we be impressed that you wrote w stupid poem? It's nothing special.

So stupid. Rukia is right.

Tite’s worst mistake was Oribitch. I am sure most bleach fans will agree to it.

WTF

Well that was a quick read :) the story is nice and well written.

Me *starts reading first chapter* what? How? *totally shockef*

Me *after reading the first chapter* waaa need tor ead the other 12 in one night!

Great idea and now will enjoy the bl**h world you created

Write stories for a couple of those lives or better yet a spinoff of this (kind of) where everyone goes back in time to one of these together

YOU HAVE GOT TO WRITE ONE FOR YORUICHI AND URAHARA PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

You do realize you wrote licking instead of liking in the sixth line of the actual story right? But either way it's HILARIOUS!XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

This was such a great story n last chapter! Phenomenal love scene! Ya know I been toying w idea of writing my own fic...with ur stories, especially this one, especially the last chap, I have been inspired to actually write one! Dunno if I will finish, or post if I do, but I already have partial scenes written n ideas floating around. If I do end up writing n posting a story, I will list u as my inspiration! Hopefully it will bring u more reads. O...n ur minor English mistakes reduced to nothing by the end of this story. Dunno if u had help or practice did it or what but its great! Keep writing fics, I wanna keep reading them! :) thank u 4 writing this for us!

Aha! I knew it! So ur German! I mean I knew or strongly suspected u were not American or brit...saw a German response once u made to reviewer but u seem to know so much Japanese I thought maybe u were from there. Anyway, I loved the idea of innoue using her phenomena rejection to fix them. Original, smart, makes sense, and just cool! Ty!

I didn't think it strange at all...great idea u got here (again) n very interesting!

Loved the poem! And btw, most readers adore angst so long as its resolved in the end. Don't ever skimp on it! :) (i wud leave u an xd smile but I can't figure out how to capitalize willfully)

Hey, it's me, the reviewer u never reply to, making me think u mad at what I say, don't care anymore, or u outta here. But I gotta say...I keep looking for good fics to read n keep ending up with yours! Ur story ideas r so good n so well-written except for the mistakes I mentioned before. To improve, if interested, I wud suggest proofreading ur chaps b4 posting n if u can, get a beta! That last one may b hard to do tho. I cud not get one to save my life in my last fandom n I so needed one. Ended up pulling 3 of my 4 stories. A good beta cuda saved them. I myself am no beta but cud totally help u w the type of errors u make if u like. And truth is...I wud luv to get ur chaps b4 everyone else! Hehe I hope u write more stories 4 me to enjoy...ty!