You should write another chapter

Yeah, that thought crossed my mind too

Beautiful story - sadly I doubt TCW will do anything with this pairing, but who knows? I love that scene when Rex cradles Ahsoka - it's one of my favorites from the whole series.

One snag - I don't think Ahsoka was trying to tell the others that they would be rescued when she fainted. By that point they had already said goodbye to Anakin and Obi-Wan, and were essentially resigned to their fate. Ahsoka's comment was made in reference to the results of their "final" efforts. Despite accusations of shallowness that are thrown around concerning Ahsoka, she is not one to shy away from death - and I don't think she expected to make it out of that vault. Whig makes the entire scene far more poignant and sad, and, as a result, more touching.

good won but i thought about mudering jar jar after i relised his stupidity at giving the chancelor emergency powers

Arg I can't remember but there was another time where it seemed as though they were getting oh! it's probably nothing but this was it. ahsoka "Rex! Boy am I glad to here your voice!"

rex "Likewise sir,"

hm idk what do you think?

You bring up a good point... Rex&Ahsoka r offically my fav Clone Wars couple. I never noticed how fast he got to her, but your side bfore, but your so right!

Pretty good, though next time I recommend you double check your spelling- people look for little things like that in writing, and to get more people to read your work you gotta be quick to fix the little mistakes. Other then that, nice job!

Yes! Someone else thinks like me! Wayii too fast XD. Very good bit, mayhaps a sequel?