For me reading this story makes me want to make 999 paper crane and give them to an sick child in the hospital

If i had to make 20,000 crane it would be crazy i lost 3 people who are my friends and miss them very much

OH MY HOL

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wow

I just had a break down due to this - he was one away and all for Kanda...was the reason his wosh came true was trading his life for Kanda?!

At least he got his wish.

Keep Up The Good Work~!

To be honest. I never cried reading a story, but this one was really touching and I ended up crying. The ending was really beautiful, depressing, and kind of romantic. Great plot for this story. Heck, I'll probably remember this story for the rest of life. Its absolutely gorgeous.

*crying* *bawling* *emotional break down* god, this is so sad!

cute and very sad….lots of fluffyness and heartbreak…..great work this story was amazing 3

My god...the feels in this story...it made me cry!

I'm crying soooo much!

That was absolutely beautiful, gorgeous. I'm in post-apocalyptic shock right now. This is truly amazing. Thats all I can say. I think your a great writer! Keep going! I loved Kanda's regret at the end it wrapped it all up nicely.

The only grammar issues are missing commas. Very good story, you have a great imagination. :)

I didn't expect it to be sad I'm crying so much holy shit TT A TT

amazing. i cried :'(

My eyes won't stop sweating .-.

Amazing, and I cried.