Sequel please?

Not bad good wording, nice describing not bad at all

wanting to become a known author and FFN for rape/smut (though I'm good at critiquing it but still working on the skills of writing)

Me gusto... Espero el otro ;P

R-A-P-E! Get your manhood out of me! It's rape! ClapClapClap It's rape! XD
(pardon my weirdness) Wait...this is your your first rape fic? Wow, it's really good!

oh...um...interesting

I loved this I think you should add more too it or make more chapters where Homurabi keeps trying to take Kengo w. And when i was reading it I did recognize what happened in chapter 12 with Homurabi using dearest Ken-kun I appluad your work on this and I would give this story a million stars~ a job well done I say

I feel sorry for Kengo, but I don't know why I liked this fic, I think I'm a little sadistic, hehe.

really intimidating

hmm i think this is pretty good for a first rape fic! :)

you really stuck to the manga, so it was easy to follow

but one point for improvement would be the ending, which was rather abrupt

i wish this pairing could be made into a series :O

*drol*

Yeah...more please.

*is incoherent*

WOW! Finally, another Kengo-centric fic! He's so cute that I have to admit this actually popped into my head a few times. And a wonderful Akira x Kengo would please me greatly. Please do keep up the good work!

I feel bad for enjoying Kengo's suffering so much...

Ah! Great work!

-Ray