i would love for there to be more of this. i love the way that it is written and your writing style

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Tenderly intimate and gently poignant. Lovely ~

Awww... Well done. :)

Awww, poor V. They are such a great couple.

One of the best fanfics I have read. Perfect subtlety and imagery.

Write more homg. I expected some sweet sweet loving! Where is it?! Finish this story! You are very good at portraying imagery by the way, I could almost see everything happen. Absolutely lovely!

Absolutely breathtaking, was really disappointed that there wasn't more. That was extremely sensual.

I hope to see more!

Great writing, I liked it a lot.

Beautiful! Just as I would have imagined V! Please don't let this be a one-shot!

Awwww, that was so sweet. Great, very well written!

Brilliantly written, :)

Oh I liked that. That was good. :)

It has been a long time since I read something that was so good. You captured everything that should have happen I would love to read more. This is a good story that you are building on and can't wait if you take it to where it needs to be.

I love it! Very sensual and toe-tingling. Although I was disappointed at first that they didn't do much more than touching, I was relieved as well, for that's exactly what V would do. You should write more fluff, you're very good at this! :)