Hm :/ confused again. But whatever. I'm a little slow, though not slow enough to not realize that this isn't about the SF at all. I wonder how any form of romance would exist since Hao is technically dead and she will die long before he does.

(though since you're here... Just wondering, who was the shaman king before Hao? :/)

This chapter left me very confused.. Who is Cat, and where did she come from? :/

Also, why did you switch the point of view?

Besides that, nice start!

I would like to say that I immesely enjoyed reading your story. This one gave me some push to make my own fanfiction better and I thank you for that. I plan on reading some of your other stuff soon, so until then.

Amusing bit of training they go through there, and of course the characters all get along (or not) splendidly, good luck with NaNoWriMo, I'm not going to bother this year personally but best of luck to you.

You're story follows the most interesting concept I've met up until now; it interweaves with the world of ShamanKing so tightly, so believable, and yet it doesn't disturb the original author's plans and plot related decisions. It does justice to the characters by not pulling them into it, but just stating that they are there.

It's cheerful, it's full of hope, it's optimistic, it's peaceful, it's so much more than 99,9 percent of all the Shaman King fanfiction out there.

It feels good to the heart.

In short; I fell in love with your story.

I bet you've got more to tell about Crystal, Cat and Tyriel, about Hao, about Yoh and consort. More to tell about Cat an Horohoro? Correct me in case I've misunderstood that part in the plane :D

Your story was like a glimpse of a vast and beatiful landscape full of dreams and kind people.

I thank you for that.

Keep it up.

Your anonymous reader ;)

sorry i could not reviev but this story is the best i have read bravos

Well, this is quite promising. This is only the first chapter I've read but since you didn't have a lot of reviews, I thought I should encourage you a little bit. I'll read the next chapters and review ASAP.

This one's a little rougher than the first, but that is to be expected when you move along quickly.

The waterfall is so cute 3