The writing in this is great. I could see every second in excruciating detail yet you never crossed the line of saying to much and disrupting the flow. I loved the spectator view point. It almost felt like the reader had stumbled across the scene. And Fred mimicking Remus was great. He liked what he saw and quickly put it to use. When Sirius saw them, I froze for a second, feeling second hand embarrassment, but instead of calling them out, he just went back to Remus. I like how at the end, Fred put on a little return show, like a thank you gift. This whole story was perfect.

*nose bleed*

Incredible.

Am I the only one who thinks this is so bloody hot?

Oh my-holy freakin-I just- OHEMGEEEEEEEEEEEe I loved it!

HOLY SHIT! This has to be the hottest thing I've ever read! When Sirius caught them, I literally stood up from my desk and walked away. I was like, oh shit! Man, that was so fucking hot! You... YOU ARE AMAZING! Never stop writing. Ever. I mean, like EVER!

Well, I'm completely new to this fandom (I write for Sherlock), but a friend thought I'd enjoy this. She was right. My passion for Holmescest (Sherlock/Mycroft) translates quite nicely to twincest with the Weasley brothers, especially when it's well written like this. :) And now, after that delicious little interlude, I need to get back to writing my own smut. Thank you!

This is so wickedly and delicously twisted, I can hardly stand it. Bravo! ]

So good!

Whhhhooooa, I thought I'd already reviewed, this is one of my all-time favourite twincest one-shots, you're such a magnificent writer, keep it up!

Awesome, again. You really know how to write...

My two favourite pairings at the same time? Holy hell. Do want.

Oh god that was hot. Awesome job. Kudos.

Very sexy, very hot, very twincest nothing is better then that. Especially when you get a dominate Remus having his way with Sirius as well.

wow! that was so hot. i dont kno what couldve done better. u had both of my favorite pairings. i 3 u!