I really liked this you can finish it one day.

Soooooooo... fictionpress? :3

at least post who she goes with and that all i ask for

This is a really good story, I love the way you have written it. I'm sad that you won't be updating it, but good luck on your novel. Maybe one day if I see it in the book store then I will buy it :) best of luck

Congrats on completeing a novel and good luck with the editing and publishing! :)

I have found this story to be rather engaging. By all means, please continue.

OMG this is such a unique idea! I Think the characters are perfect! Please write more pleeeeez! -

I think that Natsuki Takaya made her characters have the perfect personalities to be written in this form...(fairytale like, ya know like your idea, Beauty and the Beast & Cinderella) I am eagerly waiting the Kyo introduction, and your next entry. I have a feeling that he will be in the "isolation room" that they set aside for him in the manga. again, this is beautifly written and I love your writing style! Please write more quickly!

Keep writing!

-Dragon

Awesome! You took my favorite fairy tale Beauty and the Beast for this! That automatically gives you brownie points! And you've included such great creativity so far. I'm excited to see more in the future. I also can't wait for her to meet Kyo.

Wonderful story and plot you have.

-Karin-chan

Great story.

Yay! Another chapter! I love it, Yori! You better keep writing this, or I'll knock you upside the head, dearest sister. lol

Yay! I reaalt liked this! Keep writing! .

oh please update this soon! this is really good :D

i really like where this story's going! update soon!

Very good. Very very good. I'm pondering how she'll end up in the West Wing if it's locked. You're off to a good start. Keep going.

very good! is Akito the new master Tohru's going to have to serve? or is it someone else? please update whenever you get the chance... can't wait to read what happens next in this!