| Reviews for Mokuton Heiru |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/17 WTF,, why you want to go back to hell hole,, and you better go to your girlfriend home (Fire lord) |
 qguyton576 chapter 11 . 5/13 Please update more |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/30 Fuck you, you scum sucking piece of rancid shit. |
| damienfarrar10 chapter 2 . 4/19 Good story |
| Issexwithyourcloneincest chapter 1 . 3/18 I'm not fond of stories where Naruto leaves konoha because 'he's not safe anymore' , but still comes back in the end. It's like running away from a war torn country and returning later because you can finally defend yourself now. It doesn't make you safer. Another turn off was the marriage contract with hinata. It's very unlikely for them to want to marry off one of their clan members to an outsider simply because he/she has a powerful bloodline. If they were that power hungry, we'd have seen people with White sharingans running around, hiashi would have been told to try wooing Kushina(she has the Uzumaki longetivity and special chakra) and hashirama would have probably taken a hyuuga as a second wife. If you're going to make a pairing with hinata, at least don't use something as dumb as an arranged marriage. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2019 If you make this a shitty fucking harem i stg |
| Brandon Boodoo chapter 2 . 3/23/2019 1st chapter was ok then this chapter...where do i start? Orochimaru has a son... BAD Funa Uchiha? maybe - good? Everyone got Anbu now? WTF is that even a dictatorship anymore? Naruto runs into an S rank missing-nin and doesn't die... good thing this is a fanfic because he would die otherwise. |
| OmegaTakuTachi chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 Haruno is not a frickin clan |
| Thwelastlotus chapter 7 . 10/29/2018 So basically just another naruto harem fuck fest like all the other harem stories like damn harems are used almost as much as naruto x hinata I'd rather not read this it was cool when it started but then you added all the extra women and just ruined it |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 11 . 9/4/2018 this honestly was a pretty good chapter and story sucks you stopped |
| Faultypercy15 chapter 2 . 7/22/2018 so Chinomaru has 3 parents cause the only way you can get the nara name is of you were born or adopted and he probably origanlly an yamanaka duebto the mind based attacks. |
| Mr.SoujiSeta chapter 11 . 5/4/2018 Are you still working/updating stories from time to time? Or none at all? Just wondering if you are planning to continue this. This is much more interesting than the cannon strength Naruto. |
| Issy786 chapter 1 . 4/28/2018 I don't like hinata so not reading |
| yudhazebba chapter 11 . 4/4/2018 I love it this story. Why you update bro? |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/24/2018 Atualize logo, por favoe |
