Oh my Loki what a cliffy! I cannot wait to read more! :)

Wow! What a great story! I really hope Marcus finds Katie before it's too late. And how did Cormac find her anyway? Hmmm...that is a very interesting question.

I am definitely looking forward to reading more, SOON!

Fantastic story! I'm hooked! I hope to read more of this story soon :)
BTW think I've read some of your stories on AO3.

I am soooooo glad you updated this and your back writing it! I love the twists and turns you've written! Your such a fabulous writer, ive been reading yours and others you know harry potter fanfics for some years now (since chasers and OR before they shut down) and i am such a fan of your work, if i had half your talent..! Please carry on updating when you can! Thank you x

Always happy to find Katie & Marcus handled by an excellent writer. This story is so intriguing! I am definitely caught up in the mystery of Katie's stalker as well as her past relationship with Marcus. I hope you are one day inspired to start up on this again!

This is a really good plotline so far. I love how you've brought mystery/adventure into the story also. I also really like how you have the two of them working in jobs other than Quidditch.

My only concrit would be that the two of them seemed to resume their relationship really quickly and unnaturally. It seems like Katie trusts Marcus completely even though she just met him for the first time in 10 years.

very good! excited to read more. please keep goin.

Great story so far. A little intimidated by the huge paragraph of description and a little confused towards the end to who was speaking in a paragraph... Overall it's nice, just seems like it's happening a bit too fast, but I do like the suspense of McLaggen.

The plot is thickening!

It's getting more and more interesting and exciting!

And I really like the little gestures and looks between Katie and Marcus!

Great work!

Keep on going, please!

This is a rather interesting story. I like how it's written and look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!

Another excellent chapter! I do like the tracking down a murderer plot of the story and am looking forward to seeing how you portray McLaggen when he finally shows up. Great work!

Wow! Great adventure set-up so far! I like the pacing and characterization. Glad you kept Marcus' bad teeth-not everyone is perfect. The little mentions of a past are nice, too. McLaggen as a villain? Interesting...

Can't wait to see what's next! Looking forward to it!

YES - YES - YES!

I love it so far!

I like that they have a past together. That makes it more interesting and more realistic.

When he packed his things I immediately thought "He's moving in with her. That's gonna be fun!"

Great writing! Please keep on going and update soon!

I'm really enjoying this story so far! I'm glad to see a new Katie/Marcus story here! :D

I really enjoyed this! I hope there's more to come!