Aww...what a nice ending to a good fic! Hehe Skywarp is such a handful. Nice job!

I really liked the ending to this story. I loved how Skywarp saved Nina from Sunstreaker and then avenged her when he smashed his foot down on her ex's CD collection. Ohh...that must have been tough on him. I mean...I've got a pretty big CD and DVD collection myself and I'd feel absolutely terrible if I was forced to watch them all being smashed to pieces. I bet it'll take that guy A VERY LONG TIME to rebuild himself a new CD collection, but I'm sure his CD collection is a small price to pay to keep his life. I suppose that guy should be thankful that Skywarp showed him mercy. It was more than he deserved.

Anyway, loved the quick, but sweet ending. Maybe you'll do another story someday when Skywarp and Nina meet again.

This is another really good chapter, even though it's very short. I still think this is way too extreme for any Autobot to do and honestly, I cannot see Sunstraker ever attempting to kill a human. But, hey...it's only a story, so it shouldn't be taken too seriously. Good chapter. Honestly though, it IS a good story and a good chapter.

Even though I still feel this is too extreme for any Autobot to do, Sunstreaker included, I've never really like Sunstreaker that much. He's a huge show off (far worse than Tracks), always complains about his paint job and seems to enjoy slagging humans off a lot too. So, I guess if you had to write a story like this for any of the Autobots, I'm glad it was Sunstreaker.

This is a good chapter.

Ah for a moment I thought this wouldn’t be a happy ending! But the promise of another encounter makes me think that they will find other ways to… erm, get closer :oP

Sunstreaker being kicked is a very pleasant image, even more when he truly deserves it. I bet he will remember this beating for the rest of his life.

Hey, fun story. :) I really liked the line "The only remnants of him were bits of paper and trash that swirled about in the little whirlwind he left behind." Vivid image!

One grammatical problem stuck out to me: You fell into present tense near the end of Chapter 6, i.e., "He turns toward the human girl tied to a chair and preps his weapon. Nina’s heart begins to race as the Autobot prepares to fire, but Skywarp is too quick for him and manages to shoot out the roof above him, causing it to rain beams and ceiling debris all over him. Sunstreaker managed to shoot one shell from his missile launcher before the ceiling debris engulfed him, and Nina screamed as it came towards her. She closes her eyes and feels the wind bend as Skywarp teleports in front of her. He picks her up, chair and all and teleports the both of them to safety." Remember to stick in past tense. It'll still sound immediate, don't worry. :)

I loved this story. It was both funny and sweet, but it went a little too fast. Will their be a sequel? Squeal! I'm sorry I just loved it.

Oh, how sweet! Skywarp the hero! And a very fitting ending too! Nice job and thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed this one!

Cheers!

aha! A fine story, good work!

I wasn't expecting Sunstreaker. I was actually expecting Starscream.

I wonder who could've taken her...

lol He reads her emails.

Ah, dirty old Sunstreaker, using ’Con tactics. But then again, he was never known for his love to the humans. His arrogance and blind self-confidence would put him in that position; kidnapping a human girl is a small price in exchange of offlining one of his most hated enemies. But he should remember that his rival is the mighty Skywarp!

Can’t wait to know about this cowboys’ duel next chapter!

Oh no! my darling Sunstreaker and my Awesome Skywarp not playing well!

Dun,Dun, Dun!