_ *drool* oh wow, haha, that was great, haha. I wish the threesome i had was as great as that sounds XD damn alcohol... *wipes drool off face* more soon I hope?

well at first when i was reading the chapter i almost got to cry, seeing roxas misfortune but then as words went on I got the feeling that even now -not having axel- he was a lot more worried bout his magical status than his exlover. and it pained most when later axel repetead that he missed rox. i just hope that by every chap roxas discovers that true love is a lot more important than some magician issues...i just hope xD Great chapter! HOT GIRLS!

lmao, no matter how many times they are in drag i still find it funny :p aww, now i dont know whether its roxy's fault or not.. im gonna blame the parents :) cool, i like where this is going lol keep it up

lol awesome. ready and waiting for more! :D

oo this is an interesting plot! me likie alot! i love the whole fantasy genre :) its good to have the escape of reality ya know? but yeah back to the review xD axel's have elf! kyaa, thats cool x3 aww poor roxas, it must be hard on him, at the start i was thinking he was just being an arse but now its kind of justified. does this mean demyx is a wizard too? on the run from wizard mafia C: axel wanted danger, i guess he got it lol. description is great, i like the images i get from it :p look forward to reading more :D you're really good at this type of fic.

heh whip out the fire baby lets see what axel can do!

Wow...-good wow-

Woha this third chapter was a total revelation O: i would have NEVER imagined a harry poter issue XD good axel is taking everything in the right way, but Im asking myself, hows rox feeling about all this? o.o i wanna read the next chap so bad! )

oo poor roxy, he's gonna be so shocked when Ax is gone. but hey, he deserves it totally cause he treated the pyro like crap.

oo this is gonna be good i can tell. :D waiting excitedly for the next update!

Demyx being a lawyer makes me never want to commit a crime or go to court for any reason. Roxas being a lawyer is somewhat terrifying, poor Axel!