they are cute :)

That... was ridiculously sad. I'm sorry to tell you, but as much as it was humor on the outside, there was a bunch of well-hidden angst in there. And it seems to be an open ending at first glance, but we both know it wasn't. No, it was very much a closed and finished ending. They both used to like each other, they both got over it, and they both made peace with it and got closure regarding it when they confessed their feelings to each other, and I'll bet you money that the most communication between them from then on is a nod of the head when passing by each other in the hallway. They move on, forget about each other and never talk again. I really almost cried, and would have if my mom and sister weren't in the room. I just find this kind of story the saddest :'(

AHHHH NO THAT CANT BE THE END can u pleeeease write a sequel?

This was perfect and I'm in desperate need for more Al/Scor so I'm gonna go find out if you wrote more right now.

"YOU STOLE MY EARRING?"
"YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE ASLEEP!"
That line never fails to get me to crack the fuck up. Congratulations, darling. You are hilarious. And I really wanted a sequel to this, because it was actually the second fic of yours that I read (Corruption being the first, because Naynay wouldn’t shut up about it and chocolate and that chapter was delicious btw.)

Omg tell me there's a sequel! O_o

cute and funny story :)

I've come across a couple of your Albus/Scorpius stories now, this one and Blurred Vision.
I've really enjoyed reading them both; you've got a good clean storyline with the right balance of love and (pretend) hate between the characters. The beginning of this story was really funny too.
The only constructive comment I would give is that sometimes you don't put a comma after your first phrase and that sometimes obscures the meaning of the sentence because I read both phrases together and mix them up. Saying that, the previous sentence was not a good example and I hope that made some sense.
When I get some time I'll see if you have any other stories. :)

Wow! So super awesomely amazing. I was a bit surprised at Scorpius's bravery, but then I do feel that Draco would have instilled in him a sense of his own person, which would result in greater courage so I suppose it all works out but yes, amazing, the tension was perfect. :D

Love it!

Aw loved it. Really satisfying to read :)

I've read this before, back before I had an account I think? Anyways, I obviously didn't review it then. I wanted to reread it before I read the sort of sequel. I'd forgotten they didn't actually get together in the end, though obviously they both still like each other a great deal. Hence the sequel thing.

:)

-SQ

oh that is too cute! *swoons*

If you don't continue this, I will cry...very very hard.

I love this. i could see this going farther like more chapters maybe...