Reviews for Edelweiss
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
please please pleaseeeee update!
Krintz96 chapter 7 . 3/13/2014
Hey has this story been abandoned? Super sad because I was really enjoying it and wondering where you were going to go with it next. If you aren't going to finish this story is it possible to send me your future outline just to complete the story in my head? Who did she end up with and what big plot events occurred? Did Fred and lupin still die?
siriusfanno1 chapter 7 . 8/15/2013
Please update soon :)
LittleRiverSong chapter 7 . 2/1/2013
It really sucks that you last updated this in 2010, just out of courisouty, if you never update... Can you tell me what your plans for the story were?Just woundering! Love this series, it's my job/writing!
Kirando chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
I think she should be with one of the twins or Lee. Just not Wood. He's too old for her. I really like this story and I loved Wallflower. Please keep writing. You are so good at it. I actually liked Wallflower more then this one but it is still pretty interesting. It isn't as exciting though.
irianaceleste chapter 7 . 8/4/2011
Ahh man! I feel so bad for Harry! Poor kid got blamed for it and no one will even hear him out. I like how you made it as canon as possible, but with everyone alive! What a great change (: I wonder what Harry's third year is going to be like ... maybe it'll be about Mulciber since he got out of Azkban. No idea! I do hope Moony teaches though!

I read all of Wallflower and Edelweiss today. Super interesting and all that! Oh oh, maybe in the future all of them could go to the Burrow? That'd be a lot of people, but I still think it'd be interesting! (: Oh and Ally & Olly (Wood) sound cute together!
cutiebug1116yahoo.com chapter 7 . 12/5/2010
When's the next update? I keep checking and It's not there :(
I Kidnapped Sirius Black chapter 7 . 11/24/2010
GAH. I wish you wouldn't waste time on this. You should just do a year per a chapter until something ACTUALLY IMPORTANT happens... Reading Harry Potter once was enough. Reading it with the slight twist of Sirius Black having a family doesn't make it anymore bearable. I mean, everyone loves Harry Potter, but you're not JK Rowling, thus you lack her magical magic (although you are a great writer). And let's face it: the books were downright depressing.

Didn't really like the chapter's end... :/ Ridiculous. And why was Adelaide getting so emotional? O.O And WHY did they assume he was a lie? That's absolutely RIDICULOUS and unrealistic. Since when does good, sweet Harry dump a cake his beloved aunt makes for him lovingly on his now-kind cousin?

Sort of disappointing.

Despite this somewhat unhappy review, I really like this story. :) I hope you stop going word by word and focus more on Aludra. She's more interesting than Harry (since we've ALREADY READ 7 BOOKS ABOUT HIM...).

Update soon! :)
I Kidnapped Sirius Black chapter 6 . 11/24/2010
"The castle is under attack, and the bumble bee has fallen from his nest!"

Oh my gosh. The battle of Hogwarts... Dumbledore falls from that window... :O
The Previous Latter One chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
She should be with Harry. Screw being canon...LOL But I suppose that Fred or Georrge would be satisfactory subjects if nothing else...
Mira Black-Snape chapter 7 . 10/25/2010
Please finish it!
ClamKidToTheRescue chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
hey! I really like this story and like Sirius' kids :) and of course the twins :) I read the story before this but have just realised I haven't reviewed it :) oopsie :) well I really liked it :)
Midnight LeAnn chapter 7 . 7/25/2010
This was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. TTFN!
kt.potter93 chapter 7 . 7/23/2010
awww, poor harry...always getting the blame :P

haha

nice chapter :)
Lol101 chapter 7 . 7/23/2010
I feel so bad for Harry. With that said I can't wait for the adults to find out Harry wasn't making Dobby up.
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