Reviews for If I Die Before I Wake
Lady Farevay chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
Fantastic.

Lady F
Kitera-Matar chapter 1 . 1/22/2003
wow. That is good.. You can really put your passion onto the paper. That is REALLY good! You should do more of these. Even if the next chapter is another short one, if you do Sirius's emotion at some other point in his story, as well as this, it will be well worth the trouble.
Delphia chapter 1 . 1/19/2003
I liked it! V. good characterization of on-the-run Sirius...believable, but not over the top. Good job!
Phoenix Firefly chapter 1 . 11/30/2002
This is so beautifully written, so intricate, detailing the workings of his mind. Wonderful!
Kori Bischoff chapter 1 . 8/4/2002
I feel so bad for Sirius! He's one of my favorite characters, and I hate that he has to stay in hiding. I even like him more than Hermione. Can you write a happy Sirius fic? I realize that happy isn't your style, but please? Well, if not, that's okay. But you have to start more fic, because I'm reading your fics too fast. Maybe I should save some for tomorrow. Nah..
sdgageg chapter 1 . 7/26/2002
::starts crying like a baby:: poor Sirius. he really got screwed over didn't he?

I liked this a lot! ~jello
kirjavalyra chapter 1 . 4/14/2002
That was really sad, though I loved it. I hate to think of people suffering like that, but not my enemies.
Jedi Rah chapter 1 . 4/11/2002
Very good. Short and to the point, but convaying plenty of emotion.
Semmel chapter 1 . 4/1/2002
WOW! that was wonderful! can't find words. Love it!
hermione06 chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
oooo, i liked it! very well written
Princess Tangawine chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
Wow. That was really good. You could just feel it... I dunno...it's hard to explain. It's really good. Nice job!
Tashilovet chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
I am noticing a pattern in your stories. And it's kinda freaking me out. I hope that this isn't based on real feelings. Beacuse if it is, please find a way out.

"Suicide is a permanat solution to a temporary problem"

If you are not like that then...

"Give me coffee and nobody gets hurt"

Nice story. But I get confused who's POV is who's. Is this Sirius? I'm not sure.
arressayy chapter 1 . 3/3/2002
*sob sob* *throws stuffed animals at the screen in fury at Wormtail* DIE, WORMTAIL, DIE!

See what you did to poor Sirius and Remus and Lily and James, you filthy *beep*? DIE!

*cough cough* Sorry...I have very strong opinions about Peter...

But 'twas a very inspiring (even if it inspired me to throw stuffed animals at my computer) fic!

~RSA
Meg Erskine chapter 1 . 2/25/2002
*sobs brokenly* oh... my ...god... *deep breaths* sorry, i lov eSirius and this story's so sad, and extremely well written too. *cries* i must read more of your work! :)

Oh by the way, thank so SO SO SO much for reviewing my story. I am eternally grateful. More will come soon, worry not! ;)
Anakah chapter 1 . 2/6/2002
Ohh that's sad but good!
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